Time for Critic... (Lots of it)
To star these arent really sprites. They are the artwork which have been altered using copy and paste in paint.
Sprite are fully pixles. Have you looked at Other People work so you get a feeling of spriting
I have supplied a list of different topics to view (These are not links)
Teh Shiny Sprites of Tun .:The Home of PokePlush™:. (By Tundili)
A Pixel of [X5] (By [X5-452])
Windsaver's Sprite-Home of The Famous Blockymon (By Windsaver)
Sprites n' Stuff (By Kedpeanut)
Trainer J's Sprite Place (By Trainer J)
To Name A Few
Remeber to see that there are many sprite forms
If you want to look them up here are a couple:
Fusions
Trainer Sprites
Scratches (Not for beginners)
Recolours (Easiest)
Mugshots
Badges
Trainer Cards
And Plenty of Custom ideas and others
You need to really focus more on real sprites
Do you know where to get full sprite sheets?
Try The Below Link if you need them
Code:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/pokeheartgoldsoulsilver/sheet/26946
If you need anything else don't be afraid to PM me ot other people or look around to see what everyone else is doing.