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Warriors story Re-post

by Bluefeather

Bluefeather All rights reserved to me except- Crowfrost and Warriors.
I hate copyright people so please, don't say this is you'rs
Hello! Welcome! I’m Bluefeather and this story is about me and my BFFLs. It’s about our adventures and journeys, and everything in between. Even that time we go stuck in a hedgehog hole. Ha! That was classic. This story is about all of that. But it also has the most important part ever. When we met. So get ready, this is going to better that a blackbird.

Our story begins in the lush undergrowth in the territory of shadowclan. I was sent on a hunting patrol on the day of the gathering.

I was really happy because I might've been chosen to go. I had been dreaming about this since I was a kit.

Oh, wait, did I mention i’m an apprentice here? Well I am.

I was dreaming about the big area, all the clans, the leaders, and meeting the other apprentices.

I heard thunderclan is the worst, that’s what the elder, Crowfrost says. He says their vicious and cruel. I know I shouldn't listen to such an old cat, but… anyway, this part is cool, so hang on.

Bluepaw crouched and opened her mouth to scent the air. She turned around and crouched, a juicy vole was sitting under the oak. Bluepaw put on paw in front of the other and then…

“Hey Bluepaw! What are you doing?”

The vole scampered and ran away. Bluepaw turned around to see Onepaw grinning at her.

“What in Starclan are you doing here Onepaw?” Bluepaw asked.

“You scared away my vole!”

“Oopsie, I was only stopping to say hi. You see, i’m going to the sandy hollow to practice battle moves with Willowwing.”

“Oh, are you?” Bluepaw challenged.

“Yeah, I am.” Onepaw responded.

Bluepaw suddenly jumped on Onepaw’s back and cuffed her on the ear. Onepaw yowled and fell over on her side. Willowwing chose that minute to push through the brambles to see what was going on. Bluepaw jumped off Onepaw.

“What was that?” Willowwing cornered.

Bluepaw gazed over at Onepaw.

“We were just practicing battle moves.”

“Well,” Willowwing said. “That’s just what Onepaw was going to be taught, so come on Onepaw.”

Onepaw took one look at Bluepaw then pushed through the brambles following Willowwing. Why can’t any cats have friends around here?” Bluepaw thought.

Bluepaw looked around and quickly spotted another vole. She killed it with one quick swift blow to the neck and buried it under earth. Quickly she caught another vole, and a sparrow. Sandstep padded over to Bluepaw.

“Good job Bluepaw!”

“Thanks Sandstep.”

“It’s time we head back to camp.”


Bluepaw picked up her prey and padded over to where the cats were gathering.

Silverfoot nodded appreciatively at Bluepaw. Littlepaw stared at her and then turned away. He had only caught a small mouse, and a scrawny vole. It made sense that her half-brother would be angry. They all treked back to camp, their paws padding softly on the pine floor. As Bluepaw walked through the tunnel, She spotted Sharppaw with Blackpaw heading toward the nursery den with moss in their jaws. Moonstar was sitting on the branch hanging above the clearing. Skyfeather was padding to the warriors den yawning, he must have been chosen to go to the gathering. Bluepaw dropped her prey on the fresh-kill pile.

“Bluepaw, can you please take a piece of prey to the elders?” Sandstep asked

“Sure…”Bluepaw was tired, but who could say no to their mentors?

Bluepaw picked up the sparrow she had caught, and headed to the elders den.

“Hello..?” Bluepaw said. She slowly stepped in.

“What do you want?” A raspy voice responded. Crowfrost.

“I have prey.” Bluepaw said. She stepped closer to the back of the den.

“Come, Give me that prey.” Darkcloud said

Bluepaw padded to the back and dropped the sparrow on the floor. A dark paw stretched out of the shadows and took the sparrow. She heard it being stuffed into Darkcloud mouth.

“Give me some Darkcloud! Don’t be such a furball.”

Bluepaw heard the sparrow being moved across the den floor.

“Go find something else to do.” Darkcloud said his voice muffled by the feathers.

Bluepaw didn't need to be told twice, she ran out of that cave as if being chased by a badger. Darkcloud was creepy, Crowfrost was creepy, the den was creepy, everything about elders was creepy. Bluepaw jumped over Sparrowkit, nearly missing his head.

“Watch out for me!” He said “I’m a warrior!”

Bluepaw skidded into the clearing.

“Oops…!” Bluepaw whispered.

“Bluepaw! Come here!” Moonstar yelled.

Every cat stopped whatever they were doing and stared at Moonstar, then Bluepaw, then Moonstar, then Bluepaw, and back again, over and over and over.

I felt stares burning into my pelt. I gulped. I knew that I would be in big trouble. But, watch this. THIS is cool.

“Bluepaw! Come into my den. I want to speak with you.” Moonstar said.

Bluepaw padded across the clearing, and brushed past Moonstar. She padded into the leader’s den. Moonstar glanced out to the clan, which were still staring at her.

“Go back to your duties.” Moonstar ordered everyone.

The leader padded into her den.

“Bluepaw,” The leader started,”Um.. So you se-.”

“-I’m sorry! Please don’t punish me! It was an accident! I didn’t mean to hurt Sparrowkit!”

“Bluepaw, calm down you’re not in trouble.”
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