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Shaha Region!: Shaha Region Legendaries : Cinderok

by Lord Of Pain

Lord Of Pain The Disaster Trio Master, one of the Shaha region legendaries
Hi guys! Today I'll be talking about the trio master of the Middle East/Persian/Egyptian based Shaha region fakemon Legendaries! today it will be Cinderok!!

Species name: Cinderok

Type: Flying/Fighting

Pokedex entry: it resides in isolated islands in the middle of the southern seas of Shaha, it's wing flaps bring the summer, when told by Arceus it causes meteor showers and eruptions to punish humans

Ability: Searing Winds - the pokemon's burning passion raises the temperature of the air around it giving flying moves a 20% chance to burn, all pokemon weak to fire have all stats lowered by one

Appearance: Anthro bird like pokemon with honey brown feathers and silver legs, it's feet talons are red and it's arms a like bat arms but feathery, the claws of its arms are also red and the wings have a red zigzag pattern across them, the head is smooth and beakless (like how lugia has no beak but still has a bird like head), it has golden eyes with emerald green irises, deep green gems at the tips of the wing feathers and tail feathers

Signature Move: Hunt Down/Flying type - this move doesn't check accuracy and if target's health is lower than 35% health it is a OHKO

Name and Design Origin: Cinderok's name origin comes from 2 words with slight spelling alteration, The first part comes from Sindebad (altered to Cindebad), a hero of the story which the Roc is from, speaking of that the second part comes from Roc (altered to Rok), a giant bird with tremendous force, in the story when Sindebad's crew unboards the ship they find a giant white dome on the island they sailed to, later they discover the dome was an egg, despite the egg obviously being unharmed the mother Roc has violently attacked the crew (fighting Type), when the crew retreat to the ship the Roc picks it up and throws it back into the sea breaking it and drowning everyone except Sindebad, later in the story Sindebad is stuck in a valley filled with gems, he sees people at the top who toss a gigantic piece of meat in the valley, Sindebad is confused to why they did this till he saw the Roc aproaching, he held onto the meat as the Bird grabbed it and flew it out, the gems that stuck to the meat started to fall, the people started to collect the gems and Sindebad let go landing on the ground out of the valley, I altered Sindebad to Cindebad as a wordplay on the word Cinder, which is associated with heat and fire, thus referencing Cinderok bringing summer and causing meteor showers and Eruptions, I altered Roc to Rok as a wordplay on Rock since they are both pronounced the same way

Tell me what you think in the comments!
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  1. Lord Of Pain
    Lord Of Pain
    Thanks on the feedback, also I think you skipped one since Cinderok is the trio master....
    Nov 15, 2016
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  2. StellarWind Elsydeon
    StellarWind Elsydeon
    I really appreciate the thought you put into the type and design choices based on the original myth - and I only just noticed that all these legendaries are also linked to the seasons. Nice!

    The signature move though.... Insta-kill moves are incredibly annoying (there's a reason why the official OHKO are so inaccurate), and even with a relatively low PP (like I'm assuming a move like this would have), that could easily be a bit too much of Press X to Win - especially as the attack's description indicates that it has Feint-Attack-esque accuracy-ignoring damage other than that particular effect. I'd have made the instant-death effect percentage-based instead personally - give it a 1-in-3 chance to insta-murder an opponent at half HP or less or something like that - then MAYBE it wouldn't be absolute hax. XD
    Nov 15, 2016
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  3. WolfyPop
    Nov 6, 2016
  4. NerdyNinja
    Nice :)
    Oct 28, 2016
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