"A firey passion." Ash starts with an eevee who is not stubborn who wants to evolve in to a flareon but Team Rocket get ahead and steals eevee. Ash sends out gyarados and defeats Team Rocket. And some man gives her the fire stone, a key stone and a mega stone. He gave her a gyaradosnite and a charzardite. And after a walk with Alexa and Randy, they arrive in pewter city to challenge brock. Alexa and Randy are already the most popular trainers but because Her sisters Ghost and Misty, Her mother was famous though Ash was the bad girl of the family but is really nice. She bought a sweet and new phone to call her mom... And off they go Alexa has 3 Pokemon (bulbasur, magikarp and a starmy) Randy with 2 (charmander and pikachu) and ash has 4 (eevee, charmander, gyarados and a... Zapdos) Her mom gave her the Zapdos of her father. And so heading to the gym, the hero's journey continues...
Pokémon Indigo League
by Kellsey
There was a girl. Her name is Ash. So when she is 10 she wants a Charmander tho. So the next day she went to professor oak to get her Pokemon. " Oak I'm 100% going for Charmander. " Charmader was not there. So she tried bulbasaur and squirtle but Ash was too late. So Oak gave her an eevee. And in her heart she spoke to it. And already made plans for the journey. Her mother was worried cause she has to go against her big sister Misty. Her other sister is a ghost type trainer in unova. And so she is on her way to pewter city... As her journey continues...
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PokeStormI like the idea of the story and the summary, mainly because it gives a good background to the piece. However I notice the actual written work itself is really hard to follow. Maybe it's the formatting or just jumping around events. But that's just me, you write however you want, I'm just here to give pointers.
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