Gotta say I really love the amount of detail you've got going on in this work. I think how you've paid attention to how different light sources within the scene would illuminate it, and especially on the house outside. However I feel this work could really be improved by better colour choices. Every single colour in this image is really heavily saturated, and while those colours have their place, having so many of them makes the image a bit overbearing. Part of the reason I like the outside scene here is because it isn't as overbearing. Anyway perhaps keep that in mind next time, but regardless I'm looking forwards to seeing what you do next!