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Calling All Warriors!: Calling All Warriors!Pt.2

by Dootletail

Dootletail Huh....hopefully I won't give up on this series....AND HOPEFULLY LIKE IT MYSELF!!!Anyway...here's part two....from the eyes of....Marspaw!
Marspaw burst threw the camp entrance.
"What now?"Fellowpaw padded up to his brother with an annoyed look.
"Nothing.I just wanted to do a dramatic entrance like Sugarpaw did when Riverclan attacked."Marspaw said.
Fellowpaw tilted his head."Never mind that."He shook his head,"I've been waiting for you all morning!What took you so long?"
"Oh...that!Sorry..."Marspaw looked behind him and picked up his thrush,his three mice,and his rabbit."Wow!"Fellowpaw gasped,"So much for Leaf-fall!"He smiled,"I know right?"Marspaw proudly meowed,He padded over to the fresh-kill pile and dropped his kill.Sugarpaw was bringing hoursetail to the medicine cat den.
"Sense when did you become medicine cat apprentice?"Fellowpaw meowed over to her.
Sugarpaw turned his head to Fellowpaw and Marspaw,and dropped the hoursetail."Just doing Autmnpaw a favor!She was too busy gathering as much catmint she could find."She explained."Oh."Fellowpaw said blankly,"I was just concerned for a second!"
"Okay..."Sugarpaw picked up to the hoursetail once more and bounded into the medicine cat den.
Marspaw stared at Fellowpaw."You know Autmnpaw is medicine cat apprentice.Right?"Marspaw tilted his head,he knew sense Fellowpaw,him,and Sugarpaw were kits.He knew his sister and brother wanted to become the most greatest warrior in Thunderclan,which was still a promise....
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  1. Dootletail
    Dootletail
    I'm sorry.Its just I made these characters a little while back when I was almost finishing up into the wild.I normally keep OCs....or reuse them as them being another character and I'm sorry if that disturbs you.
    Jul 17, 2017
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  2. parisbuffet
    parisbuffet
    It looks great so far! Keep it up, I'd love to read more ^^
    One thing however, It's been a while since I've read the books ("a while" actually being 4th grade haha) but I don't think the warrior cats even know what a planet is, let alone mars. Seasons, too, are called other things if I remember right. Autumn is Leaf Fall I think? I made that mistake too when I made my first warrior oc and named her Angelwing, well actually, I was like 10 so it was 'ANGLEwing' lmao
    Jul 17, 2017
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