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A Bunch of OC's

by Ry_Burst

Ry_Burst So here is a bunch of my Pokemon Trainer OC's. I've included info about them and the Pokemon they have. Comment any opinions or suggestions. I'm all ears. Well not literally.
Character
Name
: Ry Burst
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Physical Appearance: He has mid length brownish red hair. His green eyes with a spark of blue in them. His skin is slightly tanned, and he has good limb strength. He has a small scar on his left shoulder.
Clothing: Normaly wears a red jacket with hood, open, black shirt, grey jeans, bathe and red sneakers. Clipped to his jeans is a white baseball cap that once belonged to his father.
Personality: Full of energy. He loves to battle, and never stops having fun. he cares for his pokemon deeply, and has large amount as of trust towards them. He does have a temper and is easy to anger, but he doesn't mean it. he is oblivious to the world around him, caring only for pokemon, battling, and his friends He wants to be friends with everyone he meets. Berry identification and cooking are important skills he learned from his mother. he is a budding Pokemon breeder, but his real dream is to be a Pokémon champ. he can Ashly connect with any pokemon he meets. He has superb battle sense, in battle, most of the time, able to calculate plans in a matter of seconds.
Backstory: When he was 6, his dad left to go stop a group of Team galactic rejects and Ry secretly followed. There was an explosion and he was saved by the legendary pokemon Latios. Latios got Ry out in the nick of time, with the only injury a small scar on his shoulder.
When he was 10, he received an egg. It soon hatched into a chmcharand Ry raised it. He and the Chimchar trained with the gym leader Mylene for 5 years. During that time, Ry got stronger and chimchar evolved into an Monferno. Tried to win the Sinnoh Leauge but lost once he reached the top 16.

Pokemon
These are a few. His team rotates around, with the exception of Fuego and Jet.
Nickname
: Fuego
Species: Infernape
Gender: Male
Ability: Blaze
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Due to being hatched from an egg, he is very much like his trainer. Hates to lose, but will accept it graciously. He has a tradition, that if he is beaten, he will give a thumbs up towards the pokemon that bested him and their trainer. He loves to battle. He likes to spar with Aura and Jet whenever he can in his free time, but he loves to just chill in a tree with his trainer. Fuego loves Spicy food and has a Brave Nature.

Nickname: Splashy
Species: Poliwrath
Gender: Male
Ability: Damp
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very loving and gentle. He is very motherly towards other pokemon. Isn't as strong a battler, as Ry's other Pokemon, but is still an important part of his team. He likes Bitter food, and has a Gentle Nature.

Nickname: Jet
Species: Sceptile --> Mega Sceptile
Gender: Male
Ability: Overgrow --> Lightning Rod
Appearance: Sometimes wears a brown leather glove with his Mega Stone
Personality: This is a very stubborn pokemon. He doesn't like most other people other then Ry. He prefers to battle when he is at a disadvantage. Either by type or skill. He hates Mega evolution, despite having the ability to do so himself. He only Mega evolves in tough situations, where he has no choice. He likes Spicy food and has an Adament Nature.

Nickname: Voltage
Species: Luxray
Gender: Male
Ability: Rivalry
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very mischeavous and gets into trouble. A lot. He always means well, but he's a troublemaker, and sometimes acts like a loner. Likes Spicy food, and has a Naughty Nature.

Nickname: Star
Species: Staraptor
Gender: Female
Ability: Reckless
Appearance: Normal
Personality: She is very calm. She doesn't get freaked out easy. She likes Sour food, and has a Relaxed Nature.

Nickname: Aura
Species: Lucario
Gender: Male
Ability: Steadfast
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very friendly. Loves to have fun. He likes dry food and has a modest nature

Nickname: Grace
Species: Togekiss
Gender: Female
Ability: Serene Grace
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very kind and nice. Much like Splashy, but more daring. She likes to explore and see new things.

Nickname: Baxter
Species: Hitmonchan
Gender: Male
Ability: Iron Fist
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very young and babyish. He loves shiny objects and is kind of the little kid of Ry's team. Even though he is evolved. He has a Genle Nature and like Sweet food.

Nickname: Gyra
Species: Gyarados
Gender: Male
Ability: Intimidate
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very angry and aggresive towards people who aren't Ry. He is very protective and loyal

Nickname: Pax
Species: Pancham
Gender: Male
Ability: Mold Breaker
Appearance: Normal
Personality: Very goofy and mischievous. He likes sweet food and has a Jolly nature.

So this is my first OC, and is named with the same name as my profile as you've already noticed. I use him for a lot of my RP's and he is a more high end character. He's a stong battler, and I'm trying to make him a powerful trainer, who understands Pokemo very well, but is oblivous to other situations. He's a more flexible charcter, that can be a hero, or comedic relief, depending on how he is represented.
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Character
Name
: Dustin Taylor
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Physical Appearance: Dustin had blonde hair, that is cut short, about an inch and a half long. He has blue eyes, and pale white skin. He is a small kid, skinny, and his posture is one of someone who is nervous and scared about something.
Clothing: He wears a white hoodie, and his hands are normally in the pocket, if he isn’t doing anything with them. He wears a Pokeball around his neck, like a necklace. He wears baggy blue jeans, and white sneakers. He doesn't try to dress fancy or in a way that could attract attention.
Personality: Dustin is shy, quiet, but has a heart of gold. He truly cares for others, but is often spooked by large crowds. He wants to hep people and Pokemon alike, but doesn't know yet. He occasionally enters Pokemon Contests, or Showcases, but mainly for fun, not really competitively.
Backstory: Dustin was born to a family of Pokemon breeders, who specialized in breeding Shiny offspring. When Dustin was a young child, he grew up with baby Pokemon, and often instead of playing with human children, he would play with the Pokémon. His parents were very distant, often ignoring Dustin for days on end, leaving the boy to fend for himself. When he was 13, a man claiming to be an Eeveeloution trainer, came to the Travis farm, and requested a shiny Eevee to be born, from his Shiny Espeon and Shiny Slyveon. His agents accepted and got to work. Soon an egg was created, and was taken care, primarily by Dustin. The Egg hatched and unfortunately, was not a Shiny. There was a huge ruckus and Dustin’s parents discussed getting rid of the Eevee and trying again to keep their Shiny Streak going. After eavesdropping on his parents, Dustin learned this, who fell in love with the Baby Eevee, decidedly run away from home with the Eevee. His plan fell into place, and the Eevee, whom Dustin named Eon, began their adventure together.


Pokemon
Nickname
: Eon
Species: Eevee
Gender: Male
Ability: Adaptability
Appearance: His physical size is slightly smaller then an average Eevee. Around is neck is a teal blue scarf, wrapped around his neck, with an Everstone in the Scarf.
Personality: Eon is babyish, and mischievous at the same time. There are times, when he purely fools around and joke around with Pokemon. But it’s all in good fun. If things get serious, he’s known to cry. Eon is sweet, and kind, and sometimes a flirter.

Nickname: Jules
Species: Electrike
Gender: Female
Ability: Lightning Rod
Appearance: Her forelegs are wrapped tightly in white bandages. Her fur is a little longer and scruffier than other Electrike.
Personality: Jules is a quick prideful fighter ready to fight, and work hard. She was under ownership of a trainer who constantly abused her. She never quit, and after Dustin rescued her, she is a loyal Pokemon, with a lot of will power.

Nickname: Zeller
Species: Buizel
Gender: Male
Ability: Swift Swim
Appearance: Zeller, is a little taller then the average, and looks much bulkier, too.
Personality: Zeller is like the father of the group, often nagging on Eon for getting into mischief, or to be a voice of reason. He’s very easy to anger, but truly cares for the others in the team.]


Extra meaning: Well first off, I'm sure you're thinking, that the Eevee shtick has been done. Which isn't not true. The idea of how Dustin got Eon is because of Eevee's popularity. I think I worked well with that, and creating a unique reason to explain Dustiin's general shyness, (Having to grow up with non attentive parent, all because of the shiny Pokemon demands or things like that.) without overusing the concept of Eevee's. If you disagree or have a suggestion on how it could be mentioned, the comment section is always open, along with the posssibility to start a conversation.
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Character
Name
: Alex Coleman
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Physical Appearance: Alex has black curly hair, sky blue eyes, with a thin, hard to see, line of freckles across his nose. He is thin, well built, and has a good amount of endurance. He has tanned skin, and a good amoun of upper body strength.
Clothing: He has a pair of goggles he wears on his forehead, in which sometimes, he puts over his eyes, but mainly when doing something crazy. He wears a dark blue navy shirt, with a white leather jacket over it. He wears blue jeans, and white converse. He is somewhat thin. He has a blue bag, similar to the style of Nate from Pokemon Black 2/White 2.
Personality: Alex is a kid, who loves adventure. He is best described as an adrenaline junkie, because he over to take risks. He can be hot headed, sometimes. He sometimes gets into circumstances where things don't turn out okay. He loves to feel wind blowing trough his face, and hates to sit still. He doesn't seem to feel fear of anything, including things where fear would be important. He has a feeling of invincibility, which can get shattered if he loses. However with his attitude, he can get back up, from even the lowest of situations.
Backstory: Alex was born and raised in Lumiose City Kalos. When he was about 9 years old, he saw a man claiming to be a Sky Trainer. Young Alex, watched in amazement as the man flew around the sky with his Talonflame, giving orders. Alex watched how the man, amazed the growing crowd and the crowd's faces of joy. He decided he wanted to have the same effect when he battled. From that day forward, Alex decided to become a Sky Trainer.
On his 14th birthday, his father caught him a Fletching, that was causing problems to the people of Lumiose. Alex and the Fletchling (Arrow) became close friends, and seemed to share a mind. They had similar personalities. After a while, he decided to travel the Kalos Region. He didn't collect badges, but he caught new friends, and became stronger.


Pokemon
Nickname
: Arrow
Species: Talonflame
Gender: Male
Ability: Gale Wings
Appearance: He has a slightly larger wingspan then the average Talonflame
Personality: During his basic form, he was quite mischievous, but when he evolve he matured in a sense. He kept his hot headed personality, and love to take risks, but was a bit nicer and calmer.

Nickname: Fang
Species: Gliscor
Gender: Male
Ability: Hyper Cutter
Appearance:
Personality: Fang is very close sharp pokemon, who is a little scary and edgy. He is loyal to Alex's commands, but can easily get angry and go berserk. As a Gligar, he was sweet, but when he evolved he wasn't as sweet any more.

Nickname: Axel
Species: Noivern
Gender: Male
Ability: Infiltrator
Appearance: Average Noivern
Personality: Despite being one of the toughest Pokemon, Alex has, Axel is super sweet. He is very parent like, and will always protect the other pokemon.

Nickname: Achilles
Species: Heracross
Gender: Male
Ability: Swarm
Appearance: He is a little buffer than an average Heracross.
Personality: He's a tough guy, who loves sweets. He has a big ego, which can be knocked down a bit, pretty easy. He always, however, gets back on his feet.

Nickname: Ivy
Species: Ivysaur
Gender: Female
Ability: Overgrow
Appearance: She is a normal Ivysaur, with a bow on her head.
Personality: She is a pokemon, who loves her appearance, and is very sweet.

Nickname: Sarge
Species: Swellow
Gender: Male
Ability: Guts
Appearance: Average Swellow, with a scar above his right eye.
Personality: Sarge is a tough, strategic Pokemon, who focuses more on plans than just wild attacking.

While I love having a trainer who wants to be a Pokemon Champion, this guy is a guy with a different goal, and just wants to travel around. He's a way to have a more unique goal. There are tons of OC's who want to be a Champion, or a Contest master or things like that. The idea of a Skytrainer is a nice one, in which I personally enjoy.
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  1. Mr Fishykarp
    Mr Fishykarp
    I totally missed out on a "the sky's the limit" pun
    Damn
    Jul 3, 2017
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  2. Mr Fishykarp
    Mr Fishykarp
    Firstly, I enjoy the ideas of all three, so I'll do each on individually. Please do not mind the puns

    Ry Burst
    I can see that Ry's team is definitely suited as a competitive team, each team member having different types and being quite powerful. Of course, the act of just randomly having a Latios appear out of nowhere is just a tad Farfetch'd. I do enjoy how each of the Pokemon has distinct unique personalities and you even went as far as to put in what kinds of food they like.

    Dustin Taylor
    I can tell that Dustin is an entirely different kind of character to Ry. I do quite like his backstory, it is unique and incorporates the popularity of Eevee, his Pokemon also fit with his character, not neccisarily being the best or most powerful, but ones that Dustin feels obliged to help. Only thing that i can see wrong is that Eon is "sometimes a flirter" which is quite strange and quite frankly concerning since he was born after Dustin's 13th birthday, and Dustin if 14, making him almost two years old at most. Aside from this though, great character with a great heart and convincing backstory, must have taken you an Eon to put it all together.

    Alex Coleman
    One thing I definitely like about Coleman is his goal. Not the basic "Champion/Contest Person/Gym Leader" goal, it's unique. A Sky Trainer is a very cool concept that not many have touched on, and I like how his team fits it well. A few issues, firstly, four of his Pokemon have the word "Sweet" in their bio, nothing wrong, just something I noticed. Secondly, it is a bit strange for him, a sky trainer, to obtain a Bulbasaur. Those are, for starters, starters (bad pun). Starters are quite rare, in both the games and parts of the anime (kind of depends). And it doesn't seem like he would go out of his way to find a Bulbasaur, a non-flying type, AND his starter is not Bulbasaur, but fletchling. There is probably some story behind it but still. Again, I love the Sky Trainer Aspect and aside from Ivysaur, all the characters fit wonderfully

    Overall, great characters with Pokemon all fitting with their personality and dreams. They all have good motivation and a convincing, realistic backstory (except Exploding-Galactic-Latios-Man). Good job coming up with this Burst of creativity

    -Fishykarp-
    Jun 15, 2017
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  3. Skippidypowpow
    Skippidypowpow
    Nice. I might make a big huge bio about my OC, Jonathan.
    Jun 8, 2017
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