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TheWanderer
TheWanderer
I've been reading some of it, and it actually looks pretty good! However, I do have some suggestions. From a formatting perspective, it's a little difficult to read, and might benefit from inserting a new paragraph before each character speaks. Also, I would recommend spending a little bit longer describing the circumstances of each thing that happens before jumping into the action.
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