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Same here, but if I know people enjoy or are entertained by my works, I will try to make them better

@AshGreninja You DO realize that the criticism would be OPTIONAL, right?

To be honest I'm all down for it, I need to work on an argument essay for my english class anyway. I wouldn't mind it if someone told me on what I should get better from this website. I mean being a writer is not one of my strong suits.

Alright, sounds great! It sounds like there's some interest, which is good. I think the next steps would be for me to sort out a proper thread – we'd need a place for people to sign up to be critics, and another for people to get their works reviewed. We'd need proper guidelines to both, and at least one example of the sort of feedback you could expect.

So, quick question: For that example, it'd make the most sense for me to do the first critique. Would anyone want to volunteer their work as tribute?

*runs away and hides*

I have an old essay I did on Mazda. I can try to find it on my computer if you want.

I volunteer as tribute! http://pokecharms.com/works/return-of-team-rocket-chapter-one-the-hero.25888/
Problem is, my works are in chapters so it wouldn't make sense for you to read chapter 5 or 6 or 8 or whatever without context, but at the same time I feel those chapters are my best ones

@SMRPG64 Works for me! I think the best bet would be to review either the first or last chapter. Which would you prefer?

I'd say second last to be honest, it was a bit rushed and i don't think it was as good as my others...

Alright, I'll read the penultimate chapter and write up a short critique for it.

Thanks

Right, written some of it, but I'm really tired now. I'll finish and post it tomorrow.

I'll volunteer...*looks at my tons of written works* Jeez that's a lot...Y'know, I think I'll volunteer my first Creepypasta! http://pokecharms.com/works/creepypasta-1.27817/

But Your Trainer Card is Amazing!!

I'm working on a new work right now, alongside my new Pokemon Haikus series. I'll volunteer in when ready!

Whelp; here you go. http://pokecharms.com/works/the-rush-of-battle-possible-spoilers.29020/

Just a question about this. Where will these be shown? Private Conversation? A thread in Creative Discussion? A new tab in the Creative Corner?

I was going to post it as a comment on the work itself. Annoyingly, I lost the document I was writing your critique in (it didn't restore properly and I forgot to save it...), so I'll have to start again. Sorry about that!

Its ok