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What Would My Evil Team Be?: Team Asteroid

by GreninjaTrainer013

GreninjaTrainer013 A (really late) response to Bird Keeper Toby's video!
What Would My Evil Team Be?

A very interesting question indeed, brought to my interest by many Youtubers and @Eeveechu151 !

The name is pretty obvious for those who have been in a few of my Pokemon RPs. (COUGH COUGH HOENN ADVENTURES COUGH COUGH ALOLA LEAGUE COUGH COUGH) Nevertheless, it's name is Team Asteroid. A pretty simple name, if I do say so myself. It also represents their main role in the story.

Next thing is the members. I'll add a few of the people I know from Charms, for the sake of putting it on this site.

The members are third. The admins, most importantly.
@Eeveechu151 (John) - The mission admin. Also known as the "Commander", he gives out most of the commands to the grunts. But he's most widely known as the mission admin because he has the most missions. He's also more of a strategy fighter.
Team: Eevee, Raichu, Decidueye, Lycanroc, Tyranitar, Houndoom.
@Fraseandchico (Fraser) - The trainer admin. With trainer, I mean someone who trains others. Frase is an expert when it comes to training other Grunts, so maybe that's the reason the grunts are so powerful at the Team Asteroid Base (More on that later). He's someone you don't wanna mess with, because he's got the strongest moves.
Team: Chesnaught, Nidoking, Dunsparce, Vikavolt, Alakazam, Kabutops.
@Ziru (Skale) - The guard admin. He guards the Team Asteroid HQ and also another place... (More on that later) He's a trusty admin, and clearly someone who's very loyal and someone who understands a lot about Pokemon. He's the main researcher of the team. What else do you need to know about him? It's pretty obvious now. (No offense tho plz don't hate me)
Team: Kommo-o, Swampert, Mightyena, Gallade, Espeon, Flygon.
@TheOneCipher (Sea) - The spy admin. A friend of the main character (You) who actually works for Team Asteroid in secret. He's been secretly trying to get information about you after you've confronted Team Asteroid multiple times. (More about that later) Nevertheless, he's he admin who you battle most (When you trust him and when he reveals everything)
Team: Dhelmise, Starmie, Magnezone, Porygon-Z, Emboar, Weezing.

Now that we've done the admins, it's time to talk about.. Me! The boss!
Now, unlike most RPs I'm in, I am NOT Alex. I am actually Estelle! A Gym Leader who focuses on Electric-types more then anything. Well, not "More then anything" precisely. I'm actually talking about one Pokemon who ISN'T a Electric-type - Deoxys!
Team (Final confrontation): Deoxys, Magnezone, Heliolisk, Electivire, and Manectric.

It's finally time to reveal everything - The story of Team Asteroid.

You first encounter Team Asteroid in Somanus Town, before going to the 1st Gym. You see 2 Team Asteroid grunts harrasing a child in giving them her Pokemon. After fighting them, the 2 grunts flee. Your second encounter with them is after beating the 2nd gym. However, you meet Sea there. He convinces you that he's one of the most biggest enemies of Team Asteroid, and he's trying to hide from them. You believe him, and he makes many appearances throughout the story. However, after beating the 3rd gym, you see them AGAIN. They're actually raiding the Glismon City Palace! After going through many rooms, you finally encounter John. His team would consist of Eevee, Raichu, Decidueye, and Rockruff. After beating him, he escapes with a certain old book (The room you were in was the storage). Your encounter with Fraser is 1 gym later - In Route 14, you see Fraser training a few Grunts. Some grunts recognize you, and Fraser challenges you to a battle. His team would be Chesnaught, Nidoking, Dunsparce, and Charjabug. After beating him, a few grunts challenge you (Yet they're very weak) and the other Grunts manage to make their escape in the meantime. Then, at Mt. Burst, after gaining the Flare Badge, an old man alerts you that Team Asteroid has gone into the volcano. You then go in, and find John and Fraser together pulling up a strange meteorite from the lava using the power of all the stolen Fire-type Pokemon from the town. Both John and Fraser challenge you in a double battle after spotting you. John's team would be Eevee, Raichu, Decidueye, Lycanroc, Pupitar, and Houndoom, while Fraser's team would be Chesnaught, Nidoking, Dunsparce, Charjabug, Kadabra, and Kabutops. After beating them, John would unleash a smoke bomb, blinding you for a few seconds, until they are revealed to have fled (Like always). Their next encounter is when you manage to come back to Nightview City, having 6 badges. The Nightview City Gym may seem old and destroyed, but it's actually owned by - You guessed it - Me! But, before facing me, you face Skale and his team would be Kommo-o, Swampert, Espeon, and Vibrava. A while after, before facing me, Sea would finally reveal his true identity. His team would be Dhelmise, Starmie, Magneton, Porygon-Z, Emboar, Weezing. Then, you would face me. My team would be Manectric, Magnezone, Heliolisk, Electivire, Raichu. After beating me, I'd give you the Shock Badge, in disgust of my defeat. The Gym would then be abandoned for the rest of the story. The final confrontation with ALL the members would be at their HUGE factory, which is their HQ! You would face every single admin with their full teams all ready. After going through each of the 4 floors (One for each admin), you get into a huge room which consists of the meteor. I was there, and I reveal the TRUE plan. The book that John stole was actually an ancient book of Deoxys, written 500 years ago! And I was actually expecting you, that's the reason why everyone trained so hard. And Skale was researching about Deoxys all this time! And Sea was trying to lead you here! And that you were actually part of an ancient legend passed down from many generations of Keno! Skale fires a ray, which then destroys the meteor and summons Deoxys. I throw the Master Ball, and catch Deoxys. We then have the final showdown. After I am defeated, you chuck the Master Ball at the wall, breaking Deoxys free and allowing him to destroy the factory. You escape just in time, with Team Asteroid. Team Asteroid then gives up and apologizes for everything they've done.

PHEW! This took a long time.. I think about an hour or two. Finally, I have it completed!
Huge thanks to all the Youtubers and Eeveechu151 for the inspiration!
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  1. flint-n-steel
    flint-n-steel
    Hey, um, the link isnt working..
    Apr 4, 2019
  2. flint-n-steel
    flint-n-steel
    Eyyy, I just found this again.
    Oof, it's been a while, hasn't it? I still didn't join the Discord, but if you could, can you change a few things? First of all, I don't feel like it's okay that my name is Skale. (Cuz i feel like that's a pokemon name, ya know?) If you can, just change Skale to Flint (my real name) and I'd like to make some changes to the Pokemon team too.
    I'm okay with Kommo-o , but I'd like to replace the others with:
    Alolan Muk, Mawile, Alolan Golem, Hydreigon and Golurk.
    Thanks. I'll probably make a discord account and join ya'll later today. :)
    (By the way, can Flint have Mawilite?)
    Mar 31, 2019
  3. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Looking back on this, I'm wondering how the heck I managed to get an Alakazam.
    Oct 12, 2018
  4. Spachino
    Spachino
    well this is creative if only i could make my team cool like this

    i guess i should actually try to put some poke charms users in my story
    Feb 27, 2018
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  5. GreninjaTrainer013
    Sep 11, 2017
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  6. GreninjaTrainer013
    GreninjaTrainer013
    Sep 11, 2017
  7. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Why am I imagining my dialogue Already!? Still, nice work Man!
    Sep 6, 2017
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  8. Mechanist Gamma
    Mechanist Gamma
    Out of the Eeveelutions, I prefer Eevee. Out of Eevee's Evolutions, I like Jolteon the best.
    Sep 6, 2017
  9. GreninjaTrainer013
    GreninjaTrainer013
    P.S. @Eeveechu151 What Eeveelution should Eevee be? Because it just shows Eevee as your favourite Pokemon, I'm not sure which Eeveelution you like most.
    Sep 6, 2017
  10. flint-n-steel
    flint-n-steel
    THIS. IS. AWESOME!!! I HAVE BEEN INVITED TO A TEAM, I FEEL SO SPECIAL, THIS WAS ONE OF MY TOTAL FAVORITE WRITTEN WORKS IN THE SITE! *Enthusiastic audience claps*
    Sep 5, 2017
  11. GreninjaTrainer013
    GreninjaTrainer013
    Jobs are haaaard, you know? I'm being forced to be named Alex and Estelle at the same time! God, how life works..
    Sep 5, 2017
  12. Mechanist Gamma
    Mechanist Gamma
    This is amazing! My team is debatable, but it still looks great.

    So now I'm an admin in two teams and the leader of one?! God, my non-Team Chimera business is exhausting...
    Sep 5, 2017
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