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The Day That Changed My Life

by Stelluna's_sister

Stelluna's_sister A horrible tragedy. An unthinkable loss. An unsolvable mystery. This is my story.
It was a warm Perfect Day in the middle of spring. My name is Elsie Lavell. I am 14 years old. This is my story. I was sitting on my porch swing reading Harry Potter for the billionth time. Suddenly my phone rang. I took it out of my pocket and looked at the screen. The caller ID said Lisha. Uh-oh. This could not be good which I promised you'd only call me from work there was an emergency. And Lish did not take her job as a nurse lightly. Her idea of an emergency and my idea of an emergency were two totally different things. Then I thought of her moment the only reason she would be calling is because of Grandma who was in the emergency room. My beloved granny who had taken care of me since I was little. I picked up the phone.

"Elsie! Come as fast as you can!! Grandma was killed!!!"

I just sat, staring wide-eyed at the screen, unable to comprehend what the words implied. Suddenly, I snapped out of my trance-like state, and grabbed my bike. There was a bike trail that went by the hospital, I would just take that, it made more sense than waiting for mother to get home...

"Oh no!!" I gasped. I realized that I had no way to get ahold of mother. I devided to leave her a note. I scribbled on a sticky note. I wrote " Mother, I'll be back soon, went to see Auntie Lish. Love, Elsie.

There! That should be fine, considering that mom doesnt call Lish to ask what's wrong... That would be really bad. If granny really is dead, I need to be the one who tells Mother.

To be continued...
  1. Midnight Heart
    Midnight Heart
    I love to read and that story seems very enteresting so please please pleeeaaaassee make more *gives you the puppy dog eyes* pleeaaassseee!!!!
    Apr 5, 2016
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  2. 33v33_lover
    I really want more. It is a great piece of writing. I cant wait to read more!
    Apr 4, 2016
  3. Stelluna's_sister
    Ok guys, i cannot wait to write some more, so I'm going to add some more to the first chapter as the day goes on, so check back in frequently!
    Apr 1, 2016
  4. Stelluna's_sister
    Thank you, we now only need 6 more requests....

    Don't you love a good cliffhanger???
    Mar 31, 2016
  5. WindRyder
    I want more :D
    Mar 31, 2016
  6. Rovenz
    1. More.
    2. Make some more chapters!
    3. That was it?
    4. More
    5. More
    6. More
    7. More
    8. More
    9. I want more! More, more, more plz!
    Mar 31, 2016
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  7. Lord Of Pain
    Lord Of Pain
    Mysterious murder story? Tragedy as well?! I SURE WANT MORE!
    Mar 31, 2016
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  8. Stelluna's_sister
    If this gets 9 more requests, I'll do the next chapter
    Mar 31, 2016
  9. Kaben and Madeleine
    Kaben and Madeleine
    Wow that is interesting I love mystery and I want to know more about the case.
    Mar 31, 2016
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