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Story of the completionist: Story of the completionist Chapter:1

by Starry Phantump

Starry Phantump This is a story based off of a game me and my cousin made up

Description:
A completionist is a child chosen by the gods at birth to protect the world from the Shadow realm they are people with special abilities
A completionist has a special weapon that can be manifested by their life force As well as a element
Ty was young teenager who is as well a completionist Ty woke up in his room to find a note on his bed "Ty we have work to do,GET UP!!!"the note read , "alright I'll get up "Ty says to the note as he gets up off his bed and changes his clothes.A green scarf wrapped around his neck a black sweater and black pants and blue goggles that went over his light blue hair he runs out his door to his small town "Willow feather" he then runs out the small wooden gates into the forest where his brother was waiting "where have you been we need to go on patrol or do you want the town to get attacked, it's you're job as a.."Austin said being interuppted by Ty "it's my job as a completionist to protect the town from the Shadow realm blah blah blah you've told me a million times"Ty said annoyingly "and you think once it would get into your thick skull"Austin says pounding his fist on Ty's head"ow quit it!!!"he yelled.
just then as the two was arguing a large rustle came from the trees around them "shhh...What was that "Austin said quietly
  1. BlazinDelphox
    BlazinDelphox
    Perhaps you would like an editor?

    Ty was young teenager who is a Completionist. Ty woke up in his room to find a note on his bed "Ty we have work to do, GET UP!" the note read, "Alright I'll get up" Ty muttered to himself as he got up off his bed and changes his clothes. A green scarf wrapped around his neck a black sweater and black pants and blue goggles that went over his light blue hair he runs out his door to his small town of Willow Feather. He then runs out the small wooden gates into the forest where his brother was waiting "Where have you been, we need to go on patrol or do you want the town to get attacked? It's your job as a…"Austin said being interrupted by Ty "It's my job as a Completionist to protect the town from the Shadow realm blah blah blah, you've told me a million times!" Ty said annoyed, "and you think once it would get into your thick skull!" Austin says pounding his fist on Ty's head "Ow quit it!" he yelled. Just then as the two was arguing a large rustle came from the trees around them "Shhh... What was that?" Austin said in a hushed voice.
    May 17, 2017
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  2. Starry Phantump
    Starry Phantump
    Thanks for the support:)
    Apr 12, 2017
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  3. Kragn
    Kragn
    @Gshinx thanks for enjoying my chapters so far! Like Popplio said, yours is very original. Can't wait to see future chapters! :)
    Apr 12, 2017
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  4. Popplio
    Popplio
    Nice story, and I think it's very original. Would recommend using more "," though.
    Apr 12, 2017
  5. Starry Phantump
    Starry Phantump
    I was reading the work adventure of Luke by @Kragn it's really good you should go read it
    Anyway it made me wanna make my own story and even though it's not Pokemon related I hope you guys will like it
    Gshinx out ;p
    Apr 12, 2017
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