It looks good, but compared to your other pieces, this one doesn't really hit me well.
First off, the detail on the lips and eyelashes don't really look right to me (that might just be nit-picky, but whatever). Also, the depth of the neck (those two lines you drew coming out of the neck) are really dis-proportioned. And like Aura already stated, the proportions of the should are really off.
To me, the drawing is great, but there are things that definitely throw me off.Aug 16, 2017Sky5372 likes this.
If you're interested in criticism I'm happy to oblige ^^ Firstly, I really like how you've drawn her hair - because there's so much detail going on it gives it a scruffy, unkept look, which works really well with the tone you seem to be going for. However I think it would be a lot better if you paid more attention to the character's anatomy. In particular what stands out here is how she seems to lack a shoulder, and how her head is too large for her face. As a general rule, the eyes of a human are about half way between the top of the head (not the forehead), and the chin, whereas in this picture her eyes are about a third of the distance instead. Still, I really do like the effort you've put into making this character seem kind of deranged - she has a lot of personality and that's awesome.Aug 16, 2017Kyubi~ likes this.