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@SS-I Never Yeah..I know some things could of been better. I'll also keep your advice in mind too. I was just trying to approach a different art style sort of so I guess it could use work. I do like this style but I will improve on it so hopefully it looks better. ^^

@Aura Thank you so much. I'm glad to have had criticism. I'll definitely keep your advice in mind. Also I'm glad that you liked it! I really respect you a lot as an artist and I will hopefully improve thanks to critique and suggestions. ^-^

It looks good, but compared to your other pieces, this one doesn't really hit me well.

First off, the detail on the lips and eyelashes don't really look right to me (that might just be nit-picky, but whatever). Also, the depth of the neck (those two lines you drew coming out of the neck) are really dis-proportioned. And like Aura already stated, the proportions of the should are really off.

To me, the drawing is great, but there are things that definitely throw me off.

If you're interested in criticism I'm happy to oblige ^^ Firstly, I really like how you've drawn her hair - because there's so much detail going on it gives it a scruffy, unkept look, which works really well with the tone you seem to be going for. However I think it would be a lot better if you paid more attention to the character's anatomy. In particular what stands out here is how she seems to lack a shoulder, and how her head is too large for her face. As a general rule, the eyes of a human are about half way between the top of the head (not the forehead), and the chin, whereas in this picture her eyes are about a third of the distance instead. Still, I really do like the effort you've put into making this character seem kind of deranged - she has a lot of personality and that's awesome.