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Newmoon Island

by Jaidev

Jaidev an island
It was a normal, sunny day in Canalave City. The wind was blowing, the birds were chirping, kids and pokemon were playing, suddenly a boy came out of nowhere with a dark force surrounding him came walking out of nowhere. Everything stopped. The sky turned dark. Everyone looked at the boy fearfully. "Come with me..." said the boy. Thunder started to rumble and, as quick as a flash, gigantic arms came out from the boy's back and pulled the people into a Dark Void. They were transported to Newmoon Island. So then a Pokemon Trainer came to Canalave City. He realized it was empty and he saw what was a piece of the dark void remaining. He wondered if he should go through it or not. He told himself yes so he went into the dark void and he found himself on Newmoon Island. He walked around and then saw zombie people, kids and Pokemon. He yelled "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and then sent out his Empoleon and told it to use Hydro Cannon. It hit half of the things, but they didn't take any damage. So the trainer sent out his other 5 pokemon Luxray, Staraptor, Torterra, Infernape and Vileplume. He told them to use their ultimate moves and they did, but it still had no effect. Suddenly, Cresselia came out of nowhere and used Moonblast on the boy, and then a Darkrai came out of the boy's body and Cresselia this time, used Moonblast on Darkrai and killed it and all the things were set free and everything was back to normal. THE END
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  1. Jaidev
    Jaidev
    What is it Karley... Is it bad? ;_;;_;;_;:'|;_;;_;;_;;_;
    Mar 29, 2015
  2. Star.Prince
    Star.Prince
    Wow... just wow.
    Mar 28, 2015
  3. Jaidev
    Jaidev
    @Colleen yes that's true I will try working on one in the next few days like on the weekend because this week I have got a LOT of homework to do we have to do a French mini project about a movie like you can choose a real one or make one up and describe how it is (what age it's for, how would you rate it, etc.) and also Math and Grammar. Sometimes you think being in Grade 6 sucks because you get a lot of work.
    Nov 20, 2014
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  4. Ghostly-Hedgehog
    Ghostly-Hedgehog
    np @Jaidev all good artist have struggles this being the audience seeing your idea behind the story but hey great story for some one of you age maybe it needs a prequal or a sequal
    Nov 19, 2014
    Karley Young likes this.
  5. Jaidev
    Jaidev
    @Colleen I respect and thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for your comment everyone says my story is bad but you said it's good so I respect and thank you again for that!
    Nov 19, 2014
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  6. Ghostly-Hedgehog
    Ghostly-Hedgehog
    AWSOME!!!!<.>
    Nov 19, 2014
  7. Jaidev
    Jaidev
    Hey everyone just know you know this is my first written work so please don't be mean
    Nov 8, 2014
    Karley Young likes this.
  8. BlackFalcon
    BlackFalcon
    Pretty dumb but I like it anyways! :p
    Nov 8, 2014
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  9. Jaidev
    Jaidev
    MY GOD THAT TOOK SUCH A LONG TIME
    Nov 7, 2014
  10. Mudkipz54
    Mudkipz54
    Short, fast, and you could have added more details or made it longer. Over all, it was a good story, though.
    Nov 7, 2014
    Karley Young likes this.