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Lapras's Story: Lapras's Story: The Capture

by Cloudswift

Cloudswift This is the story of how I got my tanky Lapras. It's only chapter one, though. It's also my first written work!
It all started on a clear summer afternoon. I was just swimming under the Village Bridge, not really doing much, when a trainer saw me. I didn't think much of it at first, but then I saw that look in her eyes, the gleam of mixed awe and greed that I had seen so many times before. She threw her pokemon, a Zebstrika. It landed with a soft thud and glared at me.
"Alright Jebstrika," the trainer commanded, "use Thunderbolt!"` The Zebstrika loosed a powerful bolt of thunder on me, almost knocking me out. It was a struggle even to keep my eyes open. I tried to move my flippers, to flee, but I was paralyzed! "Yes!" The trainer pumped her fists. She pulled a Pokeball out of her pocket and threw it at me. It landed square on my forehead and I saw a flash of light. The next thing I knew, I was in a gray, metallic chamber. So this is what the inside of a Pokeball looks like, I thought. I tried to somehow struggle free, but to no avail. I heard a click, and I knew I had been captured. I sighed, then exhaustion won in and I collapsed into sleep.
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  1. Cloudswift
    Cloudswift
    Oct 16, 2016
  2. Cloudswift
    Cloudswift
    @DarkCharizard213 actually there's gonna be a LOT more words in the third part. Its like seven pages in docs.
    Oct 16, 2016
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  3. DarkCharizard213
    DarkCharizard213
    Awesome!
    Oct 15, 2016
  4. natethenin
    natethenin
    Aspen OMG it's probably one of the best stories I've ever seen but can you add more words?
    Oct 13, 2016
  5. Pokemon Ranger Kip
    Pokemon Ranger Kip
    "Alright Jebstrika," the trainer commanded, "use Thunderbolt!"` The Zebstrika loosed a powerful bolt of thunder on me, almost knocking me out.

    You spelled Zebstrika wrong and I LOVED it
    Oct 3, 2016
  6. ToxicMetagross87
    ToxicMetagross87
    Great story really liked it!
    Sep 30, 2016
    AspenTR33 likes this.
  7. XxCherryxX
    XxCherryxX
    .. Wow
    Sep 30, 2016
    AspenTR33 likes this.