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TPA: Concussion

by CloudLine64

CloudLine64 Chapter 3
Taylor's Torchee used tackle,but it missed.
"Detter!Use bubble!"Black yelled,Detter used it and weakened Torchee,
"Tor-chee..."it moaned in pain.
"Torchee!Are you okay?!"Taylor asked,Torchee jumped up and was ready for it's next command.Taylor brightened up to see his Pokemon was okay,
"What are you doing?!Make your move already,gosh."
"Alright!Torchee use scratch!"Taylor yelled a little annoyed. Torchee jumped up into the air and scratched it claws against the Detter.
"Aw!One more attack and it will faint!"Taylor said.In the Jitan Region,Pokemon Trainers get a little device on their wrist called a Pokemon Looker,Poketinary for short.Different to a Pokedex,this helped trainers to see if a Pokemon opponent was about to faint.
"Detter!Use paddle!"Black commanded,and Detter missed,
"No!"Black threw down his scarf and clenched his fists.
"Alright,Torchee!Use scratch again!"Taylor called,Torchee did the same and didn't miss,Black's Detter fainted.Black grabbed his scarf and(literally)stuffed poor Detter into the pokeball. Black stormed off to the door,and Taylor followed.Taylor saw Black disappear into the Cabina Woods,a hand placed itself on Taylor's right shoulder,
"He'll be back.Take this."Taylor turned around to see Professor Mahogany with a Pokedex.
"Thank you,Professor! I'll make sure to fill it up with all kinds of Pokemon!"
"Taylor,it won't be that easy,with all the new Pokemon GameFreak makes every generation.".
"Wait,what?Game-what?And what's a gen-er-ation?"
"You will understand it when your older,(actually,not at all)now go start your Pokemon Adven-".
"Actually,I prefer quest."
"Then Pokemon Quest it is."and Mahogany pointed to the town(and beyond)and Taylor stepped out into the sunlight.
"Oh,and Taylor..."
"What is it Professor?"
"Watch out for the-"Mahogany never got to finish his sentence,Taylor slipped on a rock and tumbled down the stairs.Taylor laid flat on his back,looking at the sky while his vision faded.
"Taylor?Taylor!Taylor!Tay-"Mahogany's voice and his worried face disappeared,everything went black.
  1. AzureEdge
    Haha, Gamefreak and all of that? I noticed it all right.
    My story destroys the fourth wall. I don't know how much it can take anymore before its gone from the face of the earth.
    Sep 3, 2014
  2. CloudLine64
    whoops...XD oh well,also,did you see Mahogany breaking the 4th wall?Yeah,I couldn't resist,all is right in the Jitan Region.
    Sep 3, 2014
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  3. AzureEdge
    Once, a character *ahem* Azure (in another OC/Self Insert) blacked out, and she didn't wake up till a couple dungeons were done with.
    Sep 3, 2014
  4. CloudLine64
    AzureEdge,I know a dark turn for the worst,but trust me,their fine.Anyway,I hope I will be able to!
    Sep 3, 2014
  5. AzureEdge
    A concussion. Your stories are taking more of a dark turn.
    Do you have a pic of torchee and your charecters? (I seriously got asked the same thing)
    Sep 3, 2014