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The Star Sanses: Chapter One: DETERMINATION

by Tamazarokon

Tamazarokon Sorry for the hold up! :) Also, Frisk's gender will NOT be said. I will call them a they. Frisk will talk, but not much.

Dream reveals that Error is the main antagonist.
Blueberry jumped up. He threw blue bones at the monster. It stopped dead in it's tracks. "I did it!" Blueberry yelled. "I've defeated Error's monster!" The monster slapped Blueberry. He went flying.

"It stopped just to avoid the Bones!" Ink yelled. The monster rammed into Ink. Specks of dust flew off Ink. Dream flew into Ink. Dust flew off of them, making dents.

"There's no chance. We've lost. Error's done it. He's crushed our dreams..." Dream muttered. The monster flew over Blueberry, Ink, and Dream. It spat poison at the group.

Blueberry closed his eyes. He waited for the pain to come. He waited for death to come. But nothing happened. Blueberry opened his eyes. He saw a giant red shield. It was covered in poison. There was a human holding it up.

The human had a striped shirt. Blue and purple. The human shook the poison off the shield. They summoned a sword. The human struck the monster. It split in half. Then the monster turned to dust. The human turned around.

"Are you three okay?" They asked quietly. The trio nodded.
  1. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    tru. How Much Longer?
    Feb 28, 2017
    *that* guy likes this.
  2. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    @Fraseandchico and, who knows? Maybe the story started halfway through the battle where they defeated all the enemies and had this one left.
    Feb 28, 2017
  3. DaVioletAce
    DaVioletAce
    OH MY LORD
    I WANT MOREEEE
    Feb 28, 2017
  4. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    good point.
    Feb 28, 2017
  5. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    Hey! It almost killed them! The Star Sanses would be dead if Frisk didn't come! And it was a REALLY strong minion.

    @Fraseandchico
    Feb 27, 2017
  6. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Just Saying, Why Did Error Send Only ONE MINION TO FIGHT THE STAR SANSES!?
    Feb 27, 2017
  7. Tamazarokon
  8. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    Probably later today. I just don't know what the plot of the chapter yet :/
    Feb 26, 2017
  9. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    yay, BTW When Will the next part Be Out?
    Feb 26, 2017
  10. Tamazarokon
    Feb 26, 2017
  11. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Fixed. This Ok?
    Feb 26, 2017
  12. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    Feb 26, 2017
  13. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Those Glitchtale Powers Witch Didn't kill Anything
    Feb 26, 2017
  14. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    Feb 26, 2017
  15. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Yeah, He Is literally The Same In All AUs Except Underfell
    In that He Is Evil!
    Of Course He Would Be On the Star Sanses Side.
    Feb 26, 2017
  16. Tamazarokon
    Tamazarokon
    @Fraseandchico the watching over Frisk thing sounds interesting. I would think he would be on the Star Sanses Side; Right?
    Feb 26, 2017
  17. Fraseandchico
    Fraseandchico
    Feb 26, 2017
  18. Princess Lilia (Lilly)
    Feb 20, 2017