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Chapter 1: Who Are You?

by The AnimeFreak

The AnimeFreak While Twilight Sparkle was flying around Ponyville in the morning, but then while Luna was watching over the portal, something from an 'anime looking' universe appeared.
It was 9:00am, Twilight realised she was late to greet the citizens of Ponyville; AND Canterlot. Twilight couldn't eat so she went out to greet everyone. "Good Morning Everyone!" Shouted Twilight. Twilight started doing this, like, today! It was for the good. Pinkie Pie shouted to Twilight! "GOOD MORNING!" and she blew a party blower nearly on Twilight's face. "What are you doing?" Twilight asked, and Pinkie Pie responded "I have balloons right behind me!" and actually, there was 5 balloons on her back floating her.

The Pegasus guards came to inform Twilight and they informed her "A stranger has passed through the portal, not one, but two!" and Twilight was surprised so she flew there. When Twilight came, the guards were cornering the 2 people. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!????!!!!" cried person 1. It was Edward Elric, along with Alphonse. "I JUST CAME BECAUSE A FRICKIN BLACK HOLE SWALLOWED BOTH OF US UP!" Edward argued. "Lies, you tried to break in through the portal" the guards argued, but then Edward Elric used his alchemy to bash his way out.

"Wait for me, brother!" cried Alphonse. The guards went to attack but Alphonse blocked with Alchemy and tried to punch his way out, luckily, they made it out. Luna knows them, she only knows them because a person like them also came through the portal. "Oh, hello, my names Edward and my brother here is Alphonse." Edward told Luna, Luna trusted them and shouted to the guards "STOP, STAND!". The guards stopped under Luna's orders. Luna told them the good news "These people are good, they will destroy the immortal monster who intruded us!" but then a guard objected and said they are evil.

Luna used her scary voice and said "I do not care, it is UNDER MY ORDERS!" and the guard followed it, she was back to her fine voice and all of the other guards let them go, so as Luna. Twilight came right when they went out of the castle and asked "Who is this monster anyways?" and Edward Elric replied this. "Father, he is an immortal humonculus. We came here because someone called through the black hole for us to come in.". Twilight said "Okay, how about come with me for some cake. Mr Armor, are you able to eat?"

Alphonse replied "Name is Alphonse by the way, and no, my armor is hollow." and Twilight was shocked. "Anyways, let's go!" Twilight said, and they went off to Sugarcube Corner.
  1. Sparklespot336
    "What did you do?! Why did you make such a big mess?!"
    "Because its beaauutiful"
    ".. Whats beautiful."
    "... The mess I made!"
    Jan 9, 2017
  2. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    I have to be honest with everyone... This was inspired by a roleplay that me and my friend did on Skype with my sister. It was pretty much an MLP x Anime Roleplay.
    Mar 24, 2016
    TooBlue12 likes this.
  3. hackmaster
    Nicely written.
    Dec 1, 2015
  4. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    Nov 17, 2015
    TooBlue12 likes this.