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Chapter 1: My First Catch

by DarkangelPit

DarkangelPit The Pokémon Adventure's a series about a trainer's adventure. this is the first chapter.
I had bought 10 Poké Balls, and was walking to Mount Chimney. At the peak, I saw nothing. No Pokémon, no trainers, nothing. as I was about to leave, I heard a sound. I looked and saw a Pokémon standing behind me. I caught it and named it Psywing. That Pokémon was very special because it was shiny. Even now, My favorite Pokémon will always be Psywing the shiny Xatu.
  1. Azur
    Cool, but I agree that more detail would be better. It's short, but otherwise good.
    Feb 23, 2015
  2. Pikalectric7
    Creative with the pokemon card bit
    Feb 23, 2015
  3. DarkangelPit
    This is just the first chapter of a long series about Ace Trainer Noah's adventure in the many regions of Pokémon. Every time I post a chapter, his team at the end of the chapter will be posted in the form of a Pokémon card.
    Feb 23, 2015
  4. Pikalectric7
    It's a great layout of a story (like the bit about a xatu not many people take notice of that poke ) but you could make the story much better with some more detail
    Feb 23, 2015