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Eitasogare no Ai - The Story: Chapter 1 - Dawn Victim

by The AnimeFreak

The AnimeFreak I totally used google translate. Also, I came up with a short English title for this series. It's "Dusk Til' Love". I know, it's a bad title.
There was a boy, and his name was Shigeo. Shigeo Kobashigawa. He is a 16 year old boy in his 2nd year, coming back to school after a long time, excited. "Today's another day of school." He said to himself in a happy tone, but on the way to school, he bumped into someone.

"Oh, Shigeo!" Said the voice. The voice was the guy who Shigeo, and it was none other than his good pal Noboru Hirata, his childhood friend. They were friends ever since Shigeo was 7 years old. "Y-yeah, how do you do?" Shigeo responded with pain. He got up, rubbing his head, and shook hands with Noboru.

"Nothing much. How about you, oldhead?" Noboru responded. Shigeo was in anger, as usual. When Shigeo gets called by Noboru "oldhead", Shigeo gets angry, since it's about his hair on how it's a bit white and gray. "Stop calling me that!" Shigeo responded in anger.

They were walking to school together, and when they reached the lockers, a girl suddenly approached Shigeo. It was Shigeo's crush, surprisingly, and her name was Ayaka Ishida. She was a girl with brunette hair that is untied falling down her back that is long. Shigeo was surprised, and blushed a deep red.

"How do you do, Miki?" Ayaka asked Shigeo, but then Shigeo responded "G-good...", as if he were blushing. Ayaka had a big smile and she replied with "That's good. The entrance ceremony is starting, so see you there!" and with a wink. Shigeo was surprised, he didn't see that coming.

"Let's go, Oldhead!" Noboru said to Shigeo, then Shigeo responded in frustration "Sure thing, Chocolate.". They were walking up to the entrance ceremony, and they made it JUST IN TIME. It was perfect timing. After the entrance ceremony, they went outside just to take a break.

"That was normal." Shigeo said to himself, and then he heard footsteps behind him. They were as quiet as raindrops, and believe it or not, it was Ayaka Ishida. "A-Ayaka!" Shigeo responded. Shigeo looked at Ayaka's face for a while and then looked away blushing. "Miki? You okay?" Ayaka said deeply looking down at Shigeo.

Shigeo was blushing a deep red, and Ayaka went down the footsteps Shigeo was sitting on and looked at Shigeo's face, but then Shigeo looked away. "Miki..." Ayaka said in mild anger, but then Shigeo turned around and looked at Ayaka with a normal face. "I-I'm fine.", then Ayaka had a confused face.

The bell rang, and Ayaka announced it to Shigeo, saying "Miki, it's time to head back in!", then Shigeo nodded, and packed up. After school, Shigeo went to his locker without a word, and Ayaka followed him with her bag. "Miki! Let's go home together!" Ayaka asked Shigeo as if she was begging him, so Shigeo replied "O-okay" while blushing.

Ayaka was walking home singing a song smiling, and Shigeo was blushing a bit walking to the train station. Ayaka was still singing at the train station, and then when they got out, they split ways. "Okay, breath in and out, Shigeo." Shigeo keeps telling himself, and he does as he says.

When he made it back home, a few bullies surrounded Shigeo, and whether you want to believe it, or the opposite, it's his childhood bullies. "Oh, it's the fake legend." A bully said, and another one said "We are the prodigies, so why don't you get out of our circle?". They kept beating him up one by one, and he was close to death.

They beat him up till dawn, and then they got his bag and got everything from it and put his stuff into their own bag. "Why you..." said Shigeo. Right after that, a bag came flying at a bully's face out of 7. "What the hell was that?!" A bully said outrageously, and they saw a brunette girl on the left of Shigeo's house, looking down, breathing heavily.

It was undoubtedly Ayaka. "Don't hurt Miki! Don't you dare touch him!" Ayaka screamed. "What are you gonna do?" A bully said "Use magic girl powers?". "I don't see why not." Ayaka replied, and then Ayaka went max speed and came behind a bully and put him into paralysis. She wanted to protect Shigeo, so she beat all the bullies up, and carried Shigeo inside the house.

"A-Ayaka..." Shigeo said waking up at the middle of night on the couch. Ayaka was sitting on the other couch, sitting down normally. "I'm moving next to your house." Ayaka said to Shigeo. Shigeo was surprised, and didn't know why. Ayaka looked down blushing, and clutching her fists, and said "I will let no one hurt you, Miki." and she stopped being angry.

She looked up with a smile at Shigeo, then she had to go back home. "No one will hurt you, Miki, unless I am around." said Ayaka on her bed, before she slept, blushing, and then she covered herself in the blanket with embarrassment. She opened the blanket one more time to turn off the lights, text Shigeo goodnight, and sleep.

As for Shigeo, he slept as well, happily.
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  1. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    Jul 31, 2016
  2. Sparklespot336
    Wait is this your romance one
    Jul 31, 2016
  3. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    If you wanna know what the series means, it means "Eternal Twilight of Love" or "Eternal Dusk of Love" which is what I call it, but like ERASED (because the title is not translated correctly.), I call it Dusk Til' Love, because, y'know, stuff. XD
    Jul 31, 2016
  4. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    Man, if only there was a delete option.
    Jul 30, 2016
  5. Sparklespot336
    Too bored to read it now
    Jul 30, 2016
  6. The AnimeFreak
    The AnimeFreak
    You could say Ayaka is Yandere on the inside and DereDere on the outside. Yeah, you could say that.
    Jul 29, 2016
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