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[X5]'s Stuff-ez -- Please Critique. I need it.

Discussion in 'Creative Archive' started by X5-1026, Jul 17, 2010.

  1. My old art thread was pretty lame in my opinion, so this time I'm just gonna add my newer and better pix.
    Also, it was too crowded before. This will be fixed by putting in smaller images that are clickable and lead to the full sizes of those images.
    Just for the people who don't like to read these little notes:
    All Images Are Clickable
    Click the Image to See It Bigger
    Anywho, I'll be ordering these by how they are done starting with . . .

    Raw Sketches
    Inspired by Panic! at the Disco's When the Day Met the Night - My friend had a bad break-up with a guy named Felix - A goddess of a story that I've yet to write - Sher'ee Chestnut and her team

    Colored Pencils
    When I was into InuYasha, I made what Shippo's daughter would look like. - A pretty Fountain place I dreamed up

    My Old Pokemon Party and I - My Gaia Avatar - My Alter-Ego - Maxine Shadow
    Pretty Fawn - Pretty Dranrei


    Now this isn't everything I intend to put up, but it's a start.
    Enjoy. :)
  2. Re: [X5]'s Stuff-ez . . . Again

    I really like the pose and detail you put into the dancing picture. The only thing I can recommend is maybe a bit of work on your shading, her neck seems a little flat as well as her shirt and the lack of shading on her pants

    Other than that good work
  3. Re: [X5]'s Stuff-ez . . . Again

    Finally I have something new!!
    No shading yet, but it'll come.
    Sher'ee Chestnut. Based off me like 2 years ago now.
    The jacket I actually borrowed from my friend Desiree` and I don't own a Blink-182 shirt. :(
    But yeah. . . Took me long enough to color, right?
    Now I just gotta finish the rest of the pic. . . Or just make a new one all together.
    (am now noticing the hands and forearms.)
  4. Re: [X5]'s Stuff-ez . . . Again

    I drew this a few months ago as the first page of my new Notebook, but only just took a picture of it.
    [img height=400]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/128/4/e/the_wall_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3fwinm.jpg[/img]
    It's all about me. : )
    1. I do like red brick.
    2. Most people call me Meg.
    3. I freakin' LOVE turtles.
    4. I LOVE water and to swim.
    5. My favorite bird is a cardinal.
    6. My favorite flowers are tiger lilies.
    7. I like Pokemon (duh).
    8. I like paint splatters.
    9. I like circle designs.
    10. I love music.
    11. My favorite band is The Blues Brothers
    12. That's my favorite style of star
    13. I like wall art.
    I've only hung out on a dock like that once and it was EPIC!

    [img height=400]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/128/2/3/fashion___dancing_formal_dress_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3fwmng.jpg[/img]
    Yes, I've been drawing clothes sense the beginning of time. This is one of the more recent dresses, photoshopped to have higher contrast. I'll post more fashion design maybe tomorrow. Imma photoshop the pictures a wee bit first.
    I gave a Disney styled face a try. I think her neck might be too big, though.

    Now, I want to work on photography. So, please critique these the most.
    The butterfly was on my phone camera back in '04ish.
    The rest were taken on my newer better camera phone. :p
    [img height=400]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/097/0/0/my_old_backyard_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3dfsxr.jpg[/img][img height=400]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/097/8/d/the_garden_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3dfsu8.jpg[/img][img height=400]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/096/6/e/grandma__s_kitchen_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3dd0hf.jpg[/img][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]

    I did a small photo-shoot of my friend, Nando.
    This first one was actually taken at Panda Express :) I lover Photoshop.
    [img height=400]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/089/d/4/wishin___by_the_lake_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3cug0n.png[/img]
    [img height=400]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/089/5/b/chinnin___by_x_5_4_5_2-d3cuhjw.png[/img]
    [img height=400]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/089/7/d/the_look_out_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3cui6l.jpg[/img]
    Is it obvious that a photoshopped his acne scars away? I can't tell, but if you can, tell me.

    Now, please! Help me out here. Tell me what you think of them. Tell me what can change for the better.
    #4 X5-1026, May 10, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: Sep 19, 2013
  5. I redesigned Sher'ee. She dyes her hair now.
    [​IMG][img height=300]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/165/c/2/sher__ee_chestnut__s_new_face_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3iv94t.jpg[/img]
    I've yet to decide whether or not her party will change.

    I also made her Raichu, Rusty.
    [img height=300]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/165/6/9/rusty_by_x_5_4_5_2-d3ivb4b.jpg[/img]​

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