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Private/Closed Pokemon Sinnoh Adventures Discussion
- Thread starter Paeon Kanetsu
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well im going to write on the roleplay
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Okay, I'm looking forward to reading it ^^
does anybody want to meet up with me in the roleplay
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Well I'm kinda far away so...
it is just my home town doesnt mean i can not be there
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Right now I'm just entering Eterna city, so is that where you want to be then? Compared to anywhere else or nearby anyone else?
oh wow that is far yeah i think im good maybe when im stronger in the story we can meet up
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Okay sounds good to me. It's your character after all, you get to choose how his story unfolds and where he starts
yeah so see yah and may the munch be with you
Paeon Kanetsu
Previously Markus Daymo
Nah... We all got plot armor, we're all good.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Haha okay, see ya
hey pk do u want to meet up with me in the story
Paeon Kanetsu
Previously Markus Daymo
Hmm... As I said to people before, most likely it'll be later in the story when PK gets the courage to talk to people. He's... still not their yet.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Though manbat I suggest you read all that's happened until this point so you can grasp where evryone is and their characters so you can get a feel for what's going on
ok i get yeah
finnished story if you guys want to read it
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
While I enjoy the fact that it's long, and that your characters seem defined, there are a ton of spelling errors and such, and no punctuation at all. Like no periods nor commas. But if I look past that, it's an interesting bit. I was also very confused at the zen headbutt part
well munchlax can learn zen headbutt when breaded with any of slowkings forms and it also has a 30% chance of flinching when the foe is hit by it
and i can correct it, it was just my rough draft
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Well there's still is not punctuation, and now sentences are cut off and characters are saying their actions. And I was confused not by zen headbutt being learned, but how the sentence is structured in the zen headbutt scene
oh it meant to be written as thought it was a play and most scripts i have seen are so sorry about that i can fix it real quick
good story shen
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Ah thanks, I appreciate it manbat ^^
i np i just thought it was a good story so i thought i would give it a compliment
finnished my story for the day enjoy
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Use finger wag lol. This one was pretty creative, and actually the first one to feature team galactic, nice. Seems like most of the people in the roleplay are now aquiring their first gym badges.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
It might be better to read it so you can get a good grasp of everyone's characters, Pokemon, and adventures so far. But right now for sake of time, I'm in the old chateau and my team:
Sableye,male. Lv. 25
Gastly, male. Lv. 21
Spiritomb. Lv. ???
Rotom, male. Lv. 23
And yes Shedninja, I stole your idea lol
Sableye,male. Lv. 25
Gastly, male. Lv. 21
Spiritomb. Lv. ???
Rotom, male. Lv. 23
And yes Shedninja, I stole your idea lol
im at floramona town with
munchlax lv 12
machop lv 11
geodude lv 10
and a gabite lv 36 secretly following me
munchlax lv 12
machop lv 11
geodude lv 10
and a gabite lv 36 secretly following me
shenn where are u guys
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
We are in the old chateau. far away from where you currently are though
i can actualy get there right now if i wanted im at the windworks
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Now we are at Eterna city, and sure, that could be cool if you could make it work
i can it takes nothing but bam catch and shablam ooh im there but i can only be able to write on the week end and from 8 to 11 on the week days
oh by the way how is everybody day