both actually... Alarich may have a sadistic side when it comes to his nasty food creations ,but he does enjoy giving people good food too... He does actually want people to enjoy good food ,but likes to push the envelope on how gross he can make food...
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both actually... Alarich may have a sadistic side when it comes to his nasty food creations ,but he does enjoy giving people good food too... He does actually want people to enjoy good food ,but likes to push the envelope on how gross he can make food...
JPSomeone
Previously Kyle From Hoenn
Man, I dont feel like editing right now. The weekend is for the homies, ya feel me?
it's fine... say no more I know just what you mean... *a toast to the homies!*
So tomorrow I leave for Hawaii until the 12th. I’ll obviously be less active than usual but I should be able to be on at least once a day, hopefully more. Just don’t be surprised if there’s days where I’m absent, worst case scenario you can move forward and somewhat auto for me if necessary.
Okay here she is:
Name: Zandia Elric
Epithet: Night Monkey
Bounty: 4700
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Species: Mostly human, small monkey DNA
Appearance: Zandia is 5'6 and weights 120 lbs. She has long spikey dark green hair that goes down to her waist (Sonic type of hair do basically), black eyes, lightly tanned skin and fangs on her pearly white teeth. There are some things she has from her monkey like DNA, which is a full grown dark green tail and her eyes are bigger then normal human ones. Besides the fangs, messy hair, tail and big eyes, she looks pretty human. She wears a black top that goes from her chest down to her waist, white baggy pants made of very light cloth, black shoes made of leather, two white wrist bands and 3 golden piercings on her right ear.
Personality: She is a happy girl who likes to play around and explore the world. She is very loyal to those who have earned her respect and a fierce enemy to those who try to hurt her loved ones. She has a great memory for remembering paths, maps, directions or anything that has to do with navigation, but is not that good at math or art. She is a very open minded person and is always willing to try new things.
Affiliations:
Role: Navigator
Weapons: Bo Staff. It is black with thin golden vines around the edges.
Abilities:
Epithet: Night Monkey
Bounty: 4700
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Species: Mostly human, small monkey DNA
Appearance: Zandia is 5'6 and weights 120 lbs. She has long spikey dark green hair that goes down to her waist (Sonic type of hair do basically), black eyes, lightly tanned skin and fangs on her pearly white teeth. There are some things she has from her monkey like DNA, which is a full grown dark green tail and her eyes are bigger then normal human ones. Besides the fangs, messy hair, tail and big eyes, she looks pretty human. She wears a black top that goes from her chest down to her waist, white baggy pants made of very light cloth, black shoes made of leather, two white wrist bands and 3 golden piercings on her right ear.
Personality: She is a happy girl who likes to play around and explore the world. She is very loyal to those who have earned her respect and a fierce enemy to those who try to hurt her loved ones. She has a great memory for remembering paths, maps, directions or anything that has to do with navigation, but is not that good at math or art. She is a very open minded person and is always willing to try new things.
Affiliations:
Role: Navigator
Weapons: Bo Staff. It is black with thin golden vines around the edges.
Abilities:
- Curshing Blow: Zandia smashes her Bo Staff against the target, concentrating all her strength on the impact.
- Cyclone: Zandia spins around with her Bo Staff.
- Flying Kick: Zandia does a flying kick.
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we have a feral boy and now a girl with monkey dna(not a bad thing! In fact its kinda funny cause it makes the crew stranger...) Side note, I really like the fact that your character uses a bo! my favorite martial arts weapon is the rokushakubo (6 ft staff)(It's my favorite because that's the one I was taught in the class I attend). its nice seeing people choose that weapon from time to time...
The nickname sounds familiar... a Spider-Man fan?
@ThAtGuY101 I chose a Bo because I heavily influenced my character on Son Goku and Raditz xD
@Mango137 yup, you got me xD So, is it missing anything?
@Mango137 yup, you got me xD So, is it missing anything?
I assumed sun wukong(the monkey king from chinese mythology) though technically that is where goku was influenced off...
Nope she’s accepted! Just make sure you add techniques later
I'm guessing her techniques will be ultra instinct and kamehameha?
great! I will add those and join the rp then.
@ThAtGuY101 I was going for Kaioken and have her turn into an oozaru, but that might be too much xD
@ThAtGuY101 I was going for Kaioken and have her turn into an oozaru, but that might be too much xD
maybe a small oozaru... I mean chopper had a dope transformation(s)
Is that so... I had no idea... (this whole time I assumed it was a race ability). Thanks for clearing that up.
That’s a thing with a different half animal race in one piece called the minks. You could read about them and maybe adapt your character into one
I hope this doesn't sound like I'm undermining your character. Its great ,but Kyuu's attacks involve electricity too
this is another thing I did not know... I need to read more stuff now...
If you made your character a Mink you should change her race.
Minks have the common ability to generate static electricity by using basic friction science where they build up static by rubbing their fur, at least this is how I remember they explained that ability.
Name: Oshiro Kunimya
Epithet: N/A
Bounty: 0
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Species: Human
Appearance: Oshiro has fairly tanned skin, a smooth, caramel, upper-class type of skin. He stands about a head shorter than average at 5'8 and has a slender build. While no actually muscle bulges from any part of his body, he's athletically built and naturally lean. A clean, youthful face supports Oshiro round features. Though a button-like nose and high cheeks bones gives the young man an almost pretty appearance, his crazed eyes and exotic grin quickly draw away from that fact. Oshiro's thin lips are often curled into a wiry smirk, exhibiting whenever a less than nice idea pops into his head. Oshiro's eyes are bright and cat-like, a fiery shade of orange that glows no matter how bright it is outside. Thin eyebrows give away his mood, curling into dramatic expressions whenever he thinks of something. Oshiro's hair is a pale shade of green, sea foam green at the base which gradually turns into a mint pigment at the tips. His hair is well trimmed, but always messy- with the sides neatly shaven while the longer top splays out in every direction.
Personality: Oshiro is a classic attention-seeker in some ways, though his lack of general emotions makes him a bit hard to get to know. Oshi truly enjoys being the center of attention, he's the type of guy who you wouldn't bring places out of fear of him making a scene. He'll jump at almost any moment to show off his skills, up until the point where he feels like its a burden at least. He's really bad at sitting still... really, really bad. If there isn't something in front of him Oshiro will find something to do. He likes to experiment and poke at carcasses- perhaps his least attractive trait. The young male is fairly intelligent- but he thinks he is way smarter than he actually is. He loves to voice his opinions- which you can;t convince him are wrong. Despite his loud and dramatic attitude, Oshiro is a fairly shut off person. When not pointing to something else or creating chaos, he doesn't particularly enjoy spending time with or getting to know other people, and he usually had a blank face unless he's doing something fun. One admirable quality that the young-man possesses is tenacity like no other. He almost always gets his way- and never once has he bent at the will of others. Though not particularly strong, Oshiro's strong pride can keep him on hiss feet for an hour more than he should be while being absolutely pummeled by an opponent twice his size. Though not much of a team-player, Oshi takes pride in his work. And when given a part to play, he always does it to his very best- or at least he does it tremendously well until it gets boring. Oshiro is particularly found of his skills as a doctor, which he had been praised over since a young age, but he hates doing what other people tell him- and will often refuse patients if he feels they are taking him for granted.
Affiliations: Formerly a doctor for a small crew of pirates- currently not affiliated with anyone
Role: Doctor
Weapons: Oshiro weilds a thick, banana shaped piece of wood that many know as a boomerang. His boomerang is fairly large, about 16 inches from one tip to the other. It is made from dark red wood, sanded and polished, and sports a leather pad in the middle that makes it easier for Oshi to wield. Oshiro also carries a flash dial, which he acquired through a most particular trade. Though not exactly purposed for offensive combat, the young pirate will occasionally use his secret-weapon to get out of sticky situations.
Techniques: Never even officially engaging in a fight before, Oshiro doesn't have any constant 'techniques'
Home Island: Rakesh, North Blue Region
Backstory: Oshiro grew up in a fairly populated port town, his family was wealthy but busy and he had a fairly normal life. The boy always had a lust for thrill and tended to get himself into trouble growing up, both his parents worked leaving Oshiro to run recklessly through the city most of the time. Oshi was the kid who the other kids would gather around to watch him do daringly stupid things, but he never was much fond of keeping friends around. Oshiro had one particular quirk as a kid that was almost concerning. He loved to play doctor. Often poking dead things, or performing surgery on his toys- Oshiro's fascination with the body slowly became a talent. His services were actually useful by the time he was 13. Even as a young child, Oshiro knew he wasn't going to stay on Rakesh forever- the small island simply couldn't contain him. He enjoyed his little job, as a doctor on the island, but he never had any use for the cash. Oshi really did it for the thrill- he became picky over time, only accepting certain jobs while leaving others to suffer. Honestly, he never meant to help people- he just liked performing operations- and he was oddly good at it. At the ripe age of 15, Oshiro joined a band of pirates called the Crystal Belief. The crew had paused at the island for repairs, posing as a regular trading vessel while one member went to purchase parts from the market. While the rest of the town was too busy and routine to even think the skull and crossbones on the mast of the ship was odd, Oshiro's curiosity, per usual, got the better of him. Oshiro, never one to turn down a good time, walked aboard the ship with all the courage in the world- and the crew was surprisingly friendly. The more Oshi talked to the crew, the stronger his want grew to join them. In the end, without the knowledge or consent of a single person on the island, Oshiro left the island aboard that same ship- under the agreement that he could join the team if he provided free medical aid. The boy excitedly agreed and departed on a journey that really wouldn't be that long. After about a half a year with the pirates, Oshi realized that it wasn't all that it was cracked up to be. Overall, life was just as boring as it had been on the island. The crew rarely did anything special, and when they did Oshi was forced to stay behind in case they needed a doctor. Not once in those 6 months did anyone need a doctor- but the crew did make use of him. They traded him Oshiro was unsure of what was happening when he left the ship with his belongings and watched them load some other cargo onto the ship. He quickly learned that he had been made a slave, and sold to another ship which aimed to use his skills as a doctor. The only problem was that Oshiro was stubborn- scarily stubborn. And no amount of torture or crude treatment could get the young man to perform any task given to him. Figuring that he was nothing more than an extra person to keep alive, the pirates dumped him at some random dump of an island. The boy was stranded, with no way off the island- but he had far to much pride to wander inland of the garbage heap- so for two weeks he has paced along the island's shore.
Epithet: N/A
Bounty: 0
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Species: Human
Appearance: Oshiro has fairly tanned skin, a smooth, caramel, upper-class type of skin. He stands about a head shorter than average at 5'8 and has a slender build. While no actually muscle bulges from any part of his body, he's athletically built and naturally lean. A clean, youthful face supports Oshiro round features. Though a button-like nose and high cheeks bones gives the young man an almost pretty appearance, his crazed eyes and exotic grin quickly draw away from that fact. Oshiro's thin lips are often curled into a wiry smirk, exhibiting whenever a less than nice idea pops into his head. Oshiro's eyes are bright and cat-like, a fiery shade of orange that glows no matter how bright it is outside. Thin eyebrows give away his mood, curling into dramatic expressions whenever he thinks of something. Oshiro's hair is a pale shade of green, sea foam green at the base which gradually turns into a mint pigment at the tips. His hair is well trimmed, but always messy- with the sides neatly shaven while the longer top splays out in every direction.
Personality: Oshiro is a classic attention-seeker in some ways, though his lack of general emotions makes him a bit hard to get to know. Oshi truly enjoys being the center of attention, he's the type of guy who you wouldn't bring places out of fear of him making a scene. He'll jump at almost any moment to show off his skills, up until the point where he feels like its a burden at least. He's really bad at sitting still... really, really bad. If there isn't something in front of him Oshiro will find something to do. He likes to experiment and poke at carcasses- perhaps his least attractive trait. The young male is fairly intelligent- but he thinks he is way smarter than he actually is. He loves to voice his opinions- which you can;t convince him are wrong. Despite his loud and dramatic attitude, Oshiro is a fairly shut off person. When not pointing to something else or creating chaos, he doesn't particularly enjoy spending time with or getting to know other people, and he usually had a blank face unless he's doing something fun. One admirable quality that the young-man possesses is tenacity like no other. He almost always gets his way- and never once has he bent at the will of others. Though not particularly strong, Oshiro's strong pride can keep him on hiss feet for an hour more than he should be while being absolutely pummeled by an opponent twice his size. Though not much of a team-player, Oshi takes pride in his work. And when given a part to play, he always does it to his very best- or at least he does it tremendously well until it gets boring. Oshiro is particularly found of his skills as a doctor, which he had been praised over since a young age, but he hates doing what other people tell him- and will often refuse patients if he feels they are taking him for granted.
Affiliations: Formerly a doctor for a small crew of pirates- currently not affiliated with anyone
Role: Doctor
Weapons: Oshiro weilds a thick, banana shaped piece of wood that many know as a boomerang. His boomerang is fairly large, about 16 inches from one tip to the other. It is made from dark red wood, sanded and polished, and sports a leather pad in the middle that makes it easier for Oshi to wield. Oshiro also carries a flash dial, which he acquired through a most particular trade. Though not exactly purposed for offensive combat, the young pirate will occasionally use his secret-weapon to get out of sticky situations.
Techniques: Never even officially engaging in a fight before, Oshiro doesn't have any constant 'techniques'
Home Island: Rakesh, North Blue Region
Backstory: Oshiro grew up in a fairly populated port town, his family was wealthy but busy and he had a fairly normal life. The boy always had a lust for thrill and tended to get himself into trouble growing up, both his parents worked leaving Oshiro to run recklessly through the city most of the time. Oshi was the kid who the other kids would gather around to watch him do daringly stupid things, but he never was much fond of keeping friends around. Oshiro had one particular quirk as a kid that was almost concerning. He loved to play doctor. Often poking dead things, or performing surgery on his toys- Oshiro's fascination with the body slowly became a talent. His services were actually useful by the time he was 13. Even as a young child, Oshiro knew he wasn't going to stay on Rakesh forever- the small island simply couldn't contain him. He enjoyed his little job, as a doctor on the island, but he never had any use for the cash. Oshi really did it for the thrill- he became picky over time, only accepting certain jobs while leaving others to suffer. Honestly, he never meant to help people- he just liked performing operations- and he was oddly good at it. At the ripe age of 15, Oshiro joined a band of pirates called the Crystal Belief. The crew had paused at the island for repairs, posing as a regular trading vessel while one member went to purchase parts from the market. While the rest of the town was too busy and routine to even think the skull and crossbones on the mast of the ship was odd, Oshiro's curiosity, per usual, got the better of him. Oshiro, never one to turn down a good time, walked aboard the ship with all the courage in the world- and the crew was surprisingly friendly. The more Oshi talked to the crew, the stronger his want grew to join them. In the end, without the knowledge or consent of a single person on the island, Oshiro left the island aboard that same ship- under the agreement that he could join the team if he provided free medical aid. The boy excitedly agreed and departed on a journey that really wouldn't be that long. After about a half a year with the pirates, Oshi realized that it wasn't all that it was cracked up to be. Overall, life was just as boring as it had been on the island. The crew rarely did anything special, and when they did Oshi was forced to stay behind in case they needed a doctor. Not once in those 6 months did anyone need a doctor- but the crew did make use of him. They traded him Oshiro was unsure of what was happening when he left the ship with his belongings and watched them load some other cargo onto the ship. He quickly learned that he had been made a slave, and sold to another ship which aimed to use his skills as a doctor. The only problem was that Oshiro was stubborn- scarily stubborn. And no amount of torture or crude treatment could get the young man to perform any task given to him. Figuring that he was nothing more than an extra person to keep alive, the pirates dumped him at some random dump of an island. The boy was stranded, with no way off the island- but he had far to much pride to wander inland of the garbage heap- so for two weeks he has paced along the island's shore.
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Accepted! I appreciate you getting it out as soon as you could and I’m fine with waiting on the appearance (probably the least important thing anyways).
We have a Captain, Entertainer, Doctor, Navigator, Chef, and Sniper. So we could still use a Shipwright, First mate type fighter, or any other interesting role like someone to decipher the poneglyphs. You don’t have to follow the established canon positions, you could make your own type of thing as well!
Edit: we could also use another devil fruit eater
Okay, but what about a marine/navy character? Do we have one or all pirates? Just curious.
Oh whoops, I meant to answer that and completely forgot. The way we’re handling marines or other antagonists is people are free to submit bios for them at any time and they can serve as either reoccurring enemies or the main enemy for an arc; however, the rp will stay focused on the pirate crew
Fair enough. I will make a pirate bio and a reoccurring navy character bio tomorrow. But probably will come tomorrow for me. 1 AM right now lol
I look forward to it!
I'm going to be controlling the Slaver boss to up the difficulty on the fight, so I'd prefer no autoing please and thank you. What you already wrote is fine though, I can still work with it.
@ThAtGuY101
@ThAtGuY101
ah okay... my bad... should I change it?
I would’ve, but Kyuu said it’s fine
@ThAtGuY101 on second thought, I do feel pretty strongly that you should edit your post after rereading it. Along with autoing a lot, it also makes Alarich look likes he’s a big stronger than both Harphina and Elio since he did a lot better in the fight than either of them
alright... makes sense... can he still be stronger physically stronger?(he is a really big shark man I don;t know if they have extra strength due to their size) I don't know if zoro is physically stronger than luffy ,but I assumed he might have been on the account that they are considered to be on the same level...
Edit: how many slavers are left? If its just the slave boss left I can simply change it to he confronts the slaver boss rather than openly attacking him. If there are more he will likely try take them on first.
Edit: how many slavers are left? If its just the slave boss left I can simply change it to he confronts the slaver boss rather than openly attacking him. If there are more he will likely try take them on first.
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I personally don’t think Zoro is stronger or on the same level as luffy physically or just fighting in general. I mean look at the sheer strength in gear 4th. I guess I agree that without a devil fruit, Zoro would almost definitely be stronger physically and I think the same would apply here if you changed his description. I said Elio had muscle around Zoro’s level but you said Alarich was thin. Additionally, if you wanted Alarich to be the second strongest in the crew I would’ve gone for first mate so he could devote himself to fighting.
Edit: Kyuu told me that they have planned their next post based off of yours so you can leave it.
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The reason I went for chef instead of second mate was because him being a hunter and catching his fish in the ocean and capable of cooking it really well too. He still does a lot of fighting. (when I said thin I merely meant he wasn't big like Jinbe. I should have specified). Any advice on changing his description? maybe describing him more muscular?