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my cool poem hope you like

Discussion in 'Creative Archive' started by Cam-man DPokeman, Sep 23, 2005.

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  1. :pikacute: STORING SEPTEMBER You ask me what I did today.
    I could pretend and say,
    "I don't remember."
    But, no, I'll tell you what I did today-
    I stored september.
    Sat in the sun and let the sun sink in,
    Let all the warmth of it caress my skin.
    When winter comes, my skin will still remember
    The day I stored September.
    And then, my eyes-
    I filled them with the deepest, bluest skies
    And all the traceries of wasps and butterflies.
    When winter comes, my eyes will still remember
    The day they stored september.
    And there was cricket song to fill my ears!
    And the taste of grapes
    And the deep purple of them!
    And asters, like small clumps of sky...
    You know how much I love them.
    That's what I did today
    And I know why.
    Just simply for the love of it,
    I stored September.
     
  2. The fanfic section is probably the best place for this...
     
  3. :lol: If you like plz reply. :cry:
     
  4. No problem. You don't happen to know anything about the current newest member though, do you?
     
  5. yes i do, i for got my password so i did a new 1. then i remembered. srry :oops: :cry:
     
  6. D'oh. Ah well, glad that's cleared up.

    Nice poem, by the way.
     
  7. thnx! :mrgreen: i just had 2 wright it!
     
  8. I probably have to set an example now, so I think we should go back on topic.

    (Although I didn't draw it, it's from Azumanga Daioh)
     
  9. ok! that's all i wanted to know.
     
  10. Linkachu

    Linkachu Hero of Pizza
    Staff Member Administrator

    Stop double posting! :p

    Seriously, just use the edit button if you have more to say. Double posting like that is considering SPAM for a good reason (as explained in the Global Rules topic).
     
  11. baratron

    baratron Moderator of Elder Scrolls
    Staff Member Moderator

    If you wrote that poem, how come it has accurate spelling and punctuation, yet your normal posting style is along the lines of:
    ?

    If you are capable of using the English language correctly, I'd like to see it all the time, not just sometimes.

    OK, so I'm old, and snarky - but I just don't like reading gibberish.

    The poem is, btw, pretty good.
     
  12. Doctor Oak

    Staff Member Overlord

    Snark'd! ^^
     
  13. Why should you care about the way I wright? BTW, It's called short wrighting so it isn't so long! GEEZE! :x :roll:
     
  14. LOL, ROFL, etc.

    Um, yeah, you should take the time to type correctly. Else it gets very hard to read. And makes you look a bit silly.
     
  15. If you want me to wright better, then just tell me ,ok. Don't have to be so SNARKY about it. And when I write things like poems or stories, of course I'm going to write well. :roll:
     
  16. The others are right, this is a nice poem too bad you didn't write it. Stealing poems is so sad, why don't you try and write one yourself? Someone else worked hard on that poem and you tried to pass it off as your own? tsk, tsk.

    If anyone is interested it was infact written by Elizabeth Rooney, you can find Storing September and a few of her other poems here:

    http://www.brighamfarm.com/september.html
     
  17. Doctor Oak

    Staff Member Overlord

    Stealing is a bannable offense.

    Topic Locked, week-long ban. If you come back, try making something yourself instead of being a low-dirty theif of other people's hard work. N00b.
     
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