my cool poem hope you like

[Cam-man DPokeman]

ikacute: STORING SEPTEMBER You ask me what I did today.
I could pretend and say,
"I don't remember."
But, no, I'll tell you what I did today-
I stored september.
Sat in the sun and let the sun sink in,
Let all the warmth of it caress my skin.
When winter comes, my skin will still remember
The day I stored September.
And then, my eyes-
I filled them with the deepest, bluest skies
And all the traceries of wasps and butterflies.
When winter comes, my eyes will still remember
The day they stored september.
And there was cricket song to fill my ears!
And the taste of grapes
And the deep purple of them!
And asters, like small clumps of sky...
You know how much I love them.
That's what I did today
And I know why.
Just simply for the love of it,
I stored September.

 

[Chibi Tai]

The fanfic section is probably the best place for this...

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

:lol: If you like plz reply. :cry:

 

[Chibi Tai]

No problem. You don't happen to know anything about the current newest member though, do you?

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

yes i do, i for got my password so i did a new 1. then i remembered. srry ops: :cry:

 

[Chibi Tai]

D'oh. Ah well, glad that's cleared up.

Nice poem, by the way.

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

thnx! :mrgreen: i just had 2 wright it!

 

[Chibi Tai]

AND nice avatar! did u draw it?

I probably have to set an example now, so I think we should go back on topic.

(Although I didn't draw it, it's from Azumanga Daioh)

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

ok! that's all i wanted to know.

 

[Linkachu]

Stop double posting!

Seriously, just use the edit button if you have more to say. Double posting like that is considering SPAM for a good reason (as explained in the Global Rules topic).

 

[baratron]

If you wrote that poem, how come it has accurate spelling and punctuation, yet your normal posting style is along the lines of:

thnx! :mrgreen: i just had 2 wright it!

?

If you are capable of using the English language correctly, I'd like to see it all the time, not just sometimes.

OK, so I'm old, and snarky - but I just don't like reading gibberish.

The poem is, btw, pretty good.

 

[Doctor Oak]

If you wrote that poem, how come it has accurate spelling and punctuation, yet your normal posting style is along the lines of:

thnx! :mrgreen: i just had 2 wright it!

?

If you are capable of using the English language correctly, I'd like to see it all the time, not just sometimes.

OK, so I'm old, and snarky - but I just don't like reading gibberish.

The poem is, btw, pretty good.

Snark'd! ^^

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

Why should you care about the way I wright? BTW, It's called short wrighting so it isn't so long! GEEZE! :x :roll:

 

[Chibi Tai]

Why should you care about the way I wright?

LOL, ROFL, etc.

Um, yeah, you should take the time to type correctly. Else it gets very hard to read. And makes you look a bit silly.

 

[Cam-man DPokeman]

If you want me to wright better, then just tell me ,ok. Don't have to be so SNARKY about it. And when I write things like poems or stories, of course I'm going to write well. :roll:

 

[Crabmeat]

The others are right, this is a nice poem too bad you didn't write it. Stealing poems is so sad, why don't you try and write one yourself? Someone else worked hard on that poem and you tried to pass it off as your own? tsk, tsk.

If anyone is interested it was infact written by Elizabeth Rooney, you can find Storing September and a few of her other poems here:

http://www.brighamfarm.com/september.html

 

[Doctor Oak]

Stealing is a bannable offense.

Topic Locked, week-long ban. If you come back, try making something yourself instead of being a low-dirty theif of other people's hard work. N00b.