Lord Zortn's EPIC SPRITE PLACE!!! (Please Comment)

[Lord Zortn]

WELCOME ALL!!!
I've decided to change this up, instead of taking requests, I've decided to practice a bit. SOOOO i made it for you guys to tell me how I'm doing!
Cosplayers:

Absol, Giratina, & Salamence/Garchomp
Sprite Fusions:

Zachplica, Overblaze, & Bug Boss
Recolors:

Shadow, Metal, Light, & Camofladge

 

[pfreaking unbelievable]

Let's a see what I can say:
Cosplays: I like the Absol just what is up with the red stuff.
Giritina is fine. Not excactly 100% and ***** (5 stars) I'll give it a 80% **** (4 stars)
Salamence/Garchomp Spliceplay is really good just, what is he holding?
Fusions: All very well done. Bug Boss should be the evoltuion for Male Combee for gen V
Recolors: You just love zangoose so I'll say they're pretty well made actually.

Overall: Cosplays MAY need editing (just a suggestion) but the others are fine. Keep on spritin' and you'll do better. But of course, what did you expect? (Tf2 reference ftw) Beginners to be experts at the beginning? Good job.

 

[Kerauno]

I do say, these are very well made.
Cosplayers: Well, Absol is... Interesting it's kind of like a "death and destruction" theme. The bloody knife is a nice touch. Giratina is very good, it's probably my favorite, I can't really spot any flaws, so that one is great. Salamence/Garchomp is pretty cool, and I;m guessing it's holding a gun. cool.
Fusions: These are very well made and I agree with TheTurtwigfreak. Bug Boss the male Combee evo.
Recolors: Really good. I can't really spot anything wrong, so yeah.

Overall, your sprites get 4.5 stars. Just a smidge of editing on the cosplayers, a few more sprites, and you'll be getting better. Keep spriting!

 

[Lord Zortn]

Thanks guys I'll work on my cosplaying ;D. I'm pretty sure u guys already saw this one but here is my Zangoose cosplayer, overall my best cosplayer...in MY opinion:

 

[Jeydis]

Thanks guys I'll work on my cosplaying ;D. I'm pretty sure u guys already saw this one but here is my Zangoose cosplayer, overall my best cosplayer...in MY opinion:

Not much cosplaying there, no fur or claws or ears. Barely anything that tells me its a Zangoose.

 

[Lord Zortn]

Thanks guys I'll work on my cosplaying ;D. I'm pretty sure u guys already saw this one but here is my Zangoose cosplayer, overall my best cosplayer...in MY opinion:

Not much cosplaying there, no fur or claws or ears. Barely anything that tells me its a Zangoose.

good point...well it's the best looking, not the best at cosplaying.

 

[Lord Zortn]

Lavog, Frostdoom, Elite Frosteon, Frosteon
More to be uploaded MONDAY!!!!!

 

[windsaver]

Your doing well but these fusions lack line shading. The Line colours don't match the body colours making them look unfinished (Your Recolours also have this problem). The Zangoose cosplayer is good but i would make the hair white as well.

 

[Lord Zortn]

Sorry these are late...I am kinda grounded and i am tight on time. (STEALTH MODE!!! lol)

Your doing well but these fusions lack line shading. The Line colours don't match the body colours making them look unfinished (Your Recolours also have this problem). The Zangoose cosplayer is good but i would make the hair white as well.

Ok but these are old ones I made about 9 mounths ago. Heh heh And i DONT have WHITE HAIR! I am a blonde, and the zangoose cosplayer was meant to fit my image somewhat.
Now for more guys:

Black Die, Rhiald, Skirit, Fliret, Infinfear
Black Die is my FAVE! Rhiald...my first sprite EVER! Skirit...for my cousin Logan. Fliret...for my cousin Tatum. Infinfear is Black Die's servant.

 

[djcrulez]

u r very good at makeing sprites but your sprites still need inproving i cant say much because i suck at spriting but still i see great potental in u
any ways i should shut up now :-X

 

[Lord Zortn]

Thanks djcrulez, I am still working on my sprites ya know.
Time to finish off my old ones, after this, i promise they will all be new! ;D

Zortron, Aqua Lord, Dialkia, Omega, Registocegas
Zortron is Zachplica's Evolution. Aqua Lord was made for a youtube sprite contest. Dialkia...I could do better . Omega is complety screwed due to tail, but he is mah 2nd sprite. Registocegas...reffurs back to what windsaver said:

The Line colours don't match the body colours making them look unfinished (Your Recolours also have this problem).

More next time!

 

[Lord Zortn]

Sprite: Xangod
Species: God Pokemon
Type: Normal
Ability: Erie Staff - Lowers all stat's of every pokemon on the feild besides Xangod
Top 4 Attacks: Heaven's Claw, Luster Purge, Aero Blast, Shadow Force
New Attack: Heaven's Claw - Power: 120/Effect: May raise all of the user's stats
Pokedex Entry: When Xangod's staff enter's the earth, it emits an erie vibe that weaken's all who oppose it.