Yeah... I know... Gonna do it soon...
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(Sorry for double post..)
(Sorry for double post..)
And with that, the Pearlan saga concludes. The setup for something that'll happen later is now complete. I can focus on Sena and my other characters from here on out, what a relief.
@OmnipotentOnion @kyuukestu You guys seem to be moving things along on your end, so what are your plans for the next post?
If I absolutely need to, I’ll edit a Sena part into my last post to keep things going but it’s long enough as is and I was too busy to write more.
If I absolutely need to, I’ll edit a Sena part into my last post to keep things going but it’s long enough as is and I was too busy to write more.
Round two? The demon slayers go back to the the slums ,but this time they mean business ,and the thugs soon realize this when the demon slayers start smashing kneecaps... 
And eventually one of the thugs gives the location of the demon... or maybe the demon makes a dramatic entrance
"Will you guys cut it out already?! HR is going to have a field day when this is over..." - the demon
And eventually one of the thugs gives the location of the demon... or maybe the demon makes a dramatic entrance
"Will you guys cut it out already?! HR is going to have a field day when this is over..." - the demon
Phyra will agree to Kazu's plan and then...the ball's in his park. I'll need to see where the plan actually goes since the demon won't show up on either account since it's still day-out. It would give Phyra a reason not to throw the vase into sunlight though.
I suppose that after Kazu comes back Phyra will suggest just taking the vase into the sunlight and letting the Demon burn. When the demon doesn't burn they'd realize the demon wasn't in the vase and they can go looking for further leads. I'm not sure what that lead would be though, but in all likelihood, it would require some sussing into the next murder scene.
@Mango137 Something romantic? Kit and Sena in a canoe together, talking.
I feel like I made that post long enough. I know I left @kyuukestu and @Clite of Dragonbow hanging a bit; maybe I should've included the next murder, but I'm hungry and I'll do it next time if that's what should follow.
@OmnipotentOnion You're the plot driver in your arc so here's a plan. Skip Miyaji, Akane and Dolan (with @ThAtGuY101 and @JadeStar 's approval) to an alleyway where you're cornered (or the like) and encounter a squad of punks looking for revenge like "Hey, I heard you beat up a few of our guys yesterday/a few days ago" (depending how long you want the time in between to be), then the group beats them up and grows frustrated over the fact that they're always fighting humans and getting no leads. Or you could do all that in one post ("for the next few days they beat up scattered bands of street punks, some large and others small, some armed with bats and others with fists, becoming irritated and worn out that they hadn't made progress toward their mission. So when another group of brats stood before them in a dark alley at night (or the center of the slums with a clock tower at night, whichever you prefer), they had little patience for them"). That's one way this could go, speeding things up so you're not bogged down writing short posts that draw things out.
The most likely reason for your inactivity is probably that you're busy, which explains mine, so you can always try something different if you don't like me telling you things.
I feel like I made that post long enough. I know I left @kyuukestu and @Clite of Dragonbow hanging a bit; maybe I should've included the next murder, but I'm hungry and I'll do it next time if that's what should follow.
@OmnipotentOnion You're the plot driver in your arc so here's a plan. Skip Miyaji, Akane and Dolan (with @ThAtGuY101 and @JadeStar 's approval) to an alleyway where you're cornered (or the like) and encounter a squad of punks looking for revenge like "Hey, I heard you beat up a few of our guys yesterday/a few days ago" (depending how long you want the time in between to be), then the group beats them up and grows frustrated over the fact that they're always fighting humans and getting no leads. Or you could do all that in one post ("for the next few days they beat up scattered bands of street punks, some large and others small, some armed with bats and others with fists, becoming irritated and worn out that they hadn't made progress toward their mission. So when another group of brats stood before them in a dark alley at night (or the center of the slums with a clock tower at night, whichever you prefer), they had little patience for them"). That's one way this could go, speeding things up so you're not bogged down writing short posts that draw things out.
The most likely reason for your inactivity is probably that you're busy, which explains mine, so you can always try something different if you don't like me telling you things.
I was just about to drop a post. That could work.
Dolan has mastered the art of subtlety.
So... Shinra and Rin probably won't fight with Samui on their way... Wonder if there will be someone else.. Or maybe entire bunch of them.
(When you try to draw your own Shirade)
Anyways... I don't know who will stay in the manor... But that person would need to get rid of their weapon/s somewhere, not to scare demon so... Kazu probably
(When you try to draw your own Shirade)
Anyways... I don't know who will stay in the manor... But that person would need to get rid of their weapon/s somewhere, not to scare demon so... Kazu probably
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Good luck on that project! And being an uber. Hopefully your mom will rate you higher than one star and "would recommend ".
Hold up. I’m considering adding something to the post I just made.
Edit: Yeah, so I added in a middle part to my post that happens where Phyra and Kazu currently are. It involves the auctioneers seizing the vase where Basano had hid and introducing the fact that there are multiple murders tied to it. This develops the "cursed object" lore I mentioned in the backstory section of her bio.
Edit: Yeah, so I added in a middle part to my post that happens where Phyra and Kazu currently are. It involves the auctioneers seizing the vase where Basano had hid and introducing the fact that there are multiple murders tied to it. This develops the "cursed object" lore I mentioned in the backstory section of her bio.
Maybe that could throw the slayers off and make them question if it's really a demon, or something else...
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Oof. I’m gonna have to edit at some point@Mango137 Ah. I forgot to mention that there's an island in the center of the lake and Sena was hoping to make it there before the demon appeared, kind of like a safe zone from which they could plan their next move. Maybe the demon will even appear there...
I wonder if that changes things.
Tests this week (fun!) Won’t be a reply from me at least until the weekend, so stay interested!
Good luck on your tests!
Is it okay if I skip to the end of the fight with the thugs?
Would it make sense for them to reveal the name or location of the demon after the fight? Or would the demon likely reveal himself to them?
Would it make sense for them to reveal the name or location of the demon after the fight? Or would the demon likely reveal himself to them?
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The demon reveals himself to them, so I’ll take care of that part. You can skip to having beaten up the thugs though, just make sure Dolan isn’t happy, carefree and unscathed like he usually is and looks more like he just got out of a fight. XD
No big deal... It happens to us all from time to time.
Question.. (As I may not remember)
Can Kasugai birds be used to send messages between the two demon slayers?..
Can Kasugai birds be used to send messages between the two demon slayers?..
I am under the assumption that we're waiting for a response from the Auction Official, though I do believe we can proceed without explicit permission if you're alright with that. @E.K.A.N.S.
I guess so. Man, my grip on the story is really slipping, isn’t it? I was planning to have Kenshiro appear in another crowd of thugs that Miyaji and the others run into in the square right after they got done battling this one. They’d beat up a few more, but suddenly the crowd clears and gives way to Kenshiro, whom they don’t know is a demon at first and take lightly. With his last post though Onion was drawing him out by calling him a coward, which I’ll have to incorporate somehow.
As for the auction house, the official was going to resign to the slayers following his group with a twitching smile and his bodyguards turning around and stopping them just when they reached the door. The slayers could then muscle their way past/beat them up and watch the proceeds from the stands. So yeah, I guess you could continue without explicit permission, but those were my plans and I’ll work with whatever you have.
At the end of the week.
As for the auction house, the official was going to resign to the slayers following his group with a twitching smile and his bodyguards turning around and stopping them just when they reached the door. The slayers could then muscle their way past/beat them up and watch the proceeds from the stands. So yeah, I guess you could continue without explicit permission, but those were my plans and I’ll work with whatever you have.
At the end of the week.
I don't have any problem doing just that. I can mention that exact sequence happening in my post if you'd like, or I can wait if you'd rather make the posts yourself.
(I feel that my question has been ignored...)
Well... It wasn't nowhere directly mentioned.. And I had idea for something
If Kenshiro is close enough to hear Miyaji call him a coward he must be close by then right?
If it wasn’t mentioned, then it isn’t a no, and anything that isn’t a no is a yes. ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)
Doink. You’re right. I can just play it off like he didn’t hear...
(The answer to your question is that he isn’t that close, no)
And that's how you earn prison time
Though, I do recall a scene in the anime of the birds talking to each other. I believe it had to do with Kanao's cocky little crow.
JadeStar
Previously The Pikachan
@OmnipotentOnion should we wait for you?
I also kinda wait for Ekans and Kyuu..I'm a little confused on the plan... I was assuming they were gonna try lure the demon out ,but now they are rushing somewhere? And the demon about to make an appearance?
i talked with ekans; we agreed on having the thugs make one last spurt to attack, and while the trio's fighting them off, kenshiro appears. sorry for not letting y'all know beforehand
Ahh... too bad... I thought it was a funny plan ,but okay...
I also wanted to make Kazu changed into rich clothes, but it seems that it won't happend
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So like a bunch of thugs are going to come for round 3??
Fighting the demon is going to be pretty tough seeing how the threemusketeers demon slayer are now tired...
Fighting the demon is going to be pretty tough seeing how the three