O HALLO.
My name is DopeLeafeon470, as seen to your left. The dude below me is Mewtwofan259, a friend of mine. Like he said, your work is prrretty good for someone like you. Keep writing and I promise one day, you'll become one of...THEM. *bum bum bummmmm*
...and, uh, I mean you'll become one of the best writers.