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Dark Paths (Chapter 1): Dawn of day

by bioaura

bioaura This is a test story if you guys have some thing that you could help me with it would be apreciated. This is my first story EVER so I know its not perfect. If you have an idea on how I should narrate it or something else don't hesitate to comment below thx :)
December,10,2010
Im Blake I just turned 10 today and this is my first journal post or "save" like they call it. Today I got my first pokemon well atleast until it hatches. My cousin from Sinnoh brought me an egg and told me that it will be a very rare pokemon in my region and in his. I was thinking what pokemon could it be that would be so rare. But the egg looks normal to me but sometimes it moves lets a little shine, my mom tells its just my imagination but I saw it shine.Well I think that's all that happened today. Oh now that I remember I saw this weird kid with red hair today looking at the professors pokemon, but I think it was nothing through.

December,11,2010
So today I saw it move again the egg I think its about to hatch but not today I think, oh and the professor showed me his three pokemon they were totally diferent but I liked the blue one but it was kinda of a biter and constantly knaws on things. And again I saw that weird kid again but ths time he was in the window seeing, he gives me the creeps. And weird enough I saw a pokemon in the backyard that was totally weird his body was completely black, well atleast what I saw, it gave me chills. Im sleepy now so I will write tomorrow.

December,12,2010
Today the egg hatched! Its a white pokemon that shines! Its all furry and its super cute. But even the professor doesn't know what he is. I don't know how to tell if its a girl or boy but I think its a he. We played all day, and I was going to go home when I saw the kid enter the professors lab I went in and saw he took the blue pokemon that I liked I tried to stop him but my pokemon was to weak to beat him plus that blue pokemon was very strong and mine was newly hatched. I fainted until the professor talked to me and asked me who took it and I told him it was that boy. But no person knew about him. I was sad and my pokemon was too. Im tired I will stop now

December,13,2010
They found the kid who stole the pokemon but he was in the ground fainted or something and he was completely scared, so that he couldn't talk anything. And the weird thing is Totodile was in his pokeball without a scratch. Oh and yeah I found the blue pokemon"s name its Totodile.It was so weird the only thing the kid said was "Dark...so...dark...".It was pretty creepy. But aside of all that it was a pretty good day my pokemon and I had fun. But I cant stop thinking of the pokemon I saw.

December,14,2010
Today I left for my journey finally! Because my pokemon was a lot stronger since it hatched. I was leaving when my Mom gives me a pokegear its cool, but the only thing it does is call people and show my trainer Id. So later I went on the path to Cherrygrove City, that isn't much of a city anyway. I evaded some trainers that the only thing they do is battle. And I met a very friendly Rattata that followed me around but I couldn't keep I didn't have any pokeballs so it stayed in route 29 sadly, so I told to come with me. Everything else was pretty normal. So I passed route 29 and entered Cherrygrove City and it was going to be night fall and I saw my shadow turn bigger but I think it was mind playing tricks on me. So I went to the pokemart and bought a lot of pokeballs and put in in my bag. Then I asked Rattata if it wanted to be my pokemon. It nodded and I captured my first wild pokemon. Later I ate at the pokemon center and... im kinda sleepy I will continue tomorrow.

December,15,2010
I had a weird nightmare I dreamed that I was in bed with my parents on a house and my cousin was there he said "Don't worry I will find it to take away the ...." the last part was a little foggy but I remember that I saw the shadow again and it was bigger. Well except for the nightmare I had, everything seemed normal I went to see the city i liked it a lot but it seems a little old. So later i went on route 30 that was too long but i finally entered route 31 the route closest to Violet City and i entered a cave called Dark Cave, very creative... So I entered it and it was completely black and i was pretty creeped out so i left and ended up in Violet City. It was at night though so i went to the pokemon center, ate and now to sleep.

December,16,2010/part1
I had the same nightmare today I remember a bit more, it remember it was in a port like city I remember I was in bed and my mom was with me and I heard a boat moving. Then I woke up, so later I went and fed rattata and my other pokemon. My other pokemon is so cute in everyway and it loves when I pet it. Then later I went to explore a bit and then I saw a bunch of pink pokemon floating or flying above Violet City. I asked one of the people what they were and they told me that they were Spritzee they migrated once a year to sinnoh from a faraway region, and that I was very lucky because not much people see them. And finally I found the pokemon gym where I could get my first gym badge. But first the professor called and told me I needed to go back to my town something happened....(To be continued)

December,16 and17,2010/part2
I went to New Bark Town in a hurry because I knew something was wrong. I entered the town to see nothing, literally nothing. The town didn't have anyone in it and it was dark. Then I saw the shadow I dreamed about and I knew it was it doing all of this but I followed and weirdly it looked like it was trying to lead me somewhere. Then it it disappeared at the door of my house. Everything inside looked clawed out and there were tracks leading to my room. By that time my two pokemon were acting weird, scared even. When I enter my room I saw a pokemon with blue rings on it with red eyes, that looked at me and ran away by my window. Then morning came and everything was going back to normal I found my mom and the others in the professors lab and they didn't remember a thing. Well at least nothing really bad happened, but I cant stop thinking what is happening here.

December,18,2010
Since what happened yesterday everything seems weird I just don't have the answers to all the questions I have. But I know the pokemon my cousin gave me has to do something with it. So today I talked to the professor that i wanted to know what was my pokemon. And he told me to go to Mr.Pokemon he might know the identity of my pokemon. But his house is in a path passing Violet City. But it will take two days on foot, but my neighbor Cole has his eight badges and was for a visit, we were best friends when we were little but he was older and went on a journey, so I asked him if he could fly me to Mr.Pokemon's house. He threw out a Salamance, he looked very though and then I remembered, this was Bagon a pokemon that followed Cole around even when he wasn't a trainer. But I saw that Salamance was hurt in one wing and Cole told me that tomorrow he would fly me there. Because Salamance was in a tough battle earlier. My Ratatta and my other pokemon were amazed by his pokemon. Im really anxious through to know what kind of pokemon my white furry pokemon is.

December,19,2010(part 1)
Today Cole told me he could fly me to Mr.Pokemon's house but on the way he had to stop at Violet City, I really don't know why he wont tell me but I just went with it, so I had my fist flight with a pokemon Salamance is super fast so we got to Violet City In less than an hour, and we stopped there like we agreed and I sneaked a while and followed him a bit. And I saw the people really loved him looks like he helps them a lot. Later we were going to leave but an old lady needed help because she fell and I helped her and she gave a strange flower, she told she was from Sinnoh and she was still adapting to the place. I guided her to her house and she told me its ok that I could leave, so I went to Cole and Salamance flew us. But when Cole told me we were halfway, something happened a Skarmory attacked Salamance and we fell to the ground, good thing Rattata was in his pokeball and my white pokemon was in my bag, I haven't named him still because I want to know his real name, because they would have been hurt I got a little scratched but it was nothing. Cole on the other hand sprayed his arms and Salamance cant fly. I don't know what to do! (To be continued)

December,19,2010(part2)
I helped Cole with his arm and he told me to bring back Salamance so he could rest his wing and I did. And he told me to grab another pokeball and call the pokemon inside, to mu surprise it was the mythical Lugia! He told me to bring him on the back of the mythical pokemon. But that I had to help him direct Lugia the way to the town. Knowing Cole he wouldn't said that for anything but it was an emergency. So I sat on its back and Cole told me where to go, and the Skarmory came back but we knocked it out with a Hyper Beam. I had never felt the so much power that a pokemon like that could have. So later luckily we ended up in Violet City fast. But when we were in the entrance Cole he told me to bring Lugia back to his pokeball because some people aren't ready to see Lugia. I didn't understand why wouldn't he show his pokemon to the town but I followed. I helped him to get help and he told me it was ok that I could leave, I left but I felt a bit worried and now I have more questions on what happened today. Well I have to rest for the long trip tomorrow.
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  1. lilonegia
    lilonegia
    Love the story!
    Aug 27, 2014
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  2. Vaporeonn
    Vaporeonn
    Where? Further then eyes can see? I can't look there you know .. ;)
    Feb 2, 2014
  3. bioaura
    bioaura
    I tried to make the other one not so notable but its in there :)
    Feb 2, 2014
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  4. Vaporeonn
    Vaporeonn
    Two shinnies o.O
    Didn't notice the other one ..
    Feb 2, 2014
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  5. bioaura
    bioaura
    thx I tried to give it a series season ending that leaves you with the doubt on what really happened :)
    Feb 2, 2014
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  6. Tarot Trainer
    Tarot Trainer
    Nice way to wrap up this chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
    Feb 2, 2014
  7. bioaura
    bioaura
    thx :D and it will I plan doing a lot more stuff in the next chapter :) oh and its not one but there are two shinies mentioned :) good luck finding what they are.
    Feb 2, 2014
  8. Vaporeonn
    Vaporeonn
    When will you reveal who is tge shiny Pokemon you have? I am sooo curious!
    Awesome job! Just keep it up like this!
    Feb 2, 2014
  9. bioaura
    bioaura
    Thx for reading guys I will make the second chapter soon if you have some ideas comment below :)
    Feb 2, 2014
  10. bioaura
    bioaura
    Thx ok I think I will do the next entry and do a second chapter.
    Jan 27, 2014
  11. Tarot Trainer
    Tarot Trainer
    As long as you continue from where your last journal entry left off, choose whichever you feel like doing. :)
    Jan 27, 2014
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  12. bioaura
    bioaura
    What do you guys think I should stop here and do a second chapter or continue?
    Jan 27, 2014
  13. bioaura
    bioaura
    Thx and I will :D
    Jan 25, 2014
  14. WarWolf263
    WarWolf263
    It's good. Keep it up!
    Jan 25, 2014
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  15. bioaura
    bioaura
    Yeah you are right :) thx
    Jan 23, 2014
  16. Eevee Princess
    Eevee Princess
    Take your time and don't feel pressured to write entries for your story everyday. Just go at your own pace. :)
    Jan 23, 2014
  17. bioaura
    bioaura
    Yeah it was like that because the second part is in both days, THX a lot for reading :) sorry about that I have been busy with school.
    :'|
    Jan 22, 2014
  18. Vaporeonn
    Vaporeonn
    Yes! I was waiting forever for you to continue this story! It's just so fun!
    Oh and by the way, isn't it January 16/part 2? Just asking, but maybe it was continued in the next day?
    Jan 22, 2014
  19. bioaura
    bioaura
    For those who read my story i will try to make two entries a day thx for reading :)
    Jan 19, 2014
  20. bioaura
    bioaura
    Yeah I will continue later today thx and I had the idea of making it, like journal entries because I always remember my avatar writing in its journal always when I saved.And I wanted to do a story on how a trainer feels on his journey.:)
    Jan 19, 2014
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  21. Vaporeonn
    Vaporeonn
    This is so cool! I can't wait to see what happened next!
    Oh, and I realy like the idea of journal entries.. It gives the story something special.
    Will you continue this story? Because you said it was a test story..
    Jan 19, 2014
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  22. bioaura
    bioaura
    You have to find out yourself and thx a lot for the comment :)
    Jan 19, 2014
  23. HuskyDragonWolvez
    HuskyDragonWolvez
    I like this story!

    White and fluffy...hmm...shiny Eevee?
    I don't know, I'm just being curious XD
    Jan 19, 2014
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  24. bumpei wilkos
    bumpei wilkos
    i like it its good
    Jan 19, 2014
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  25. bioaura
    bioaura
    yeah I was aiming for that thx for noticing
    Jan 19, 2014
  26. Eevee Princess
    Eevee Princess
    Oh I see. By the way, if the grammar mistakes in the journal entries were done on purpose, I think it works well since your character is 10 years old. :)
    Jan 19, 2014
  27. bioaura
    bioaura
    Thx and its kinda the role of gold but its another person,the thing is im planning to do later references to his backround.
    Jan 19, 2014
  28. Eevee Princess
    Eevee Princess
    I like what you wrote so far.
    To help you out a bit, are you in the role of Gold, or are you your own Trainer?

    You could also provide a short background story, like you used to live in Sinnoh but moved to Johto at some point in your life.
    Jan 19, 2014
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  29. bioaura
    bioaura
    Exactly what you said :) I will incorporate what you said thx.
    Jan 19, 2014
  30. Tarot Trainer
    Tarot Trainer
    Nice story so far. From what I can tell, you're a Trainer from Johto. Assuming from your writing style, you are in the role of a Trainer who is just starting out on his journey. I'm guessing that your character just turned 10, since that's the age people usually start their Pokémon journeys? If so, you could mention your Trainer's age at the first journal entry.
    Jan 19, 2014
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